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@icekatze
that's the other problem I have with the way it was handled. If I had to pull that kind of threat I would feel uncomfortable trusting them on a regular basis. I know it's just a story but this part seems to not fit in unless it is going in a completely different direction.
Something like, "I saved your life and you repay me by holding my family hostage? Why do you think I'd fall in love with you?" Or even, "Threaten my family again, and see how reliable your threat detector turns out to be."
that's the other problem I have with the way it was handled. If I had to pull that kind of threat I would feel uncomfortable trusting them on a regular basis. I know it's just a story but this part seems to not fit in unless it is going in a completely different direction.