Death March kara Hajimaru Isekai Kyousoukyoku - Vol. 9 Ch. 57.5 - Extra Volume 9v.2

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Sorry, I forgot to say one thing. I won't translate the main series, just the extras and Death March Ex: Arisa Ojou no Isekai Funtouki sinse no one show interest =/

Every one, have a good read~♪ =D
 
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@tenten32158

kkkk you have my thanks XD
When I collec more notes from you people, I will post a version two.
At least I wait it make you laugh even a little ;D

In Brazilian Portuguese, they have the same writing =P
 
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First of all: Thank you for your work and although there's some small stuff, it is absolutely readable. Please don't feel discouraged by me going though the story with a fine-toothed comb.
Second: I'm not a native speaker as well but I'll try to catch as many errors as I can. There's a lot of small, mostly grammar stuff.

Page 1, first panel: "Heroine", as mentioned already
Page 1, second panel: "when even an [Attendant] seemed unreachable" (P.s. I'm not really happy with this as well, it still sounds wrong somehow)
Page 1, third panel: "Though Otou-sama didn't say it clearly", "Whenever my bride lessons came to a break, I ended up going to the back yard to train"
Page 2, second panel: "Just a bit until your Highness, the Demon Lord-sama, gets/is reborn."
Page 3, second panel: "I need to reach the other side of the wood!"
Page 4, fourth panel: "Ugh, it's hurting/it hurts (sounds a bit more natural imo) so much..."
Page 4, seventh panel: "What is the reason for you to seek power?"
 
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@Elhao

No, instead you have my gratitude ^^
I found another in the novel part as well and there are less than I expected, in truth.
The only thing I'm amazed is that the chapter is already in Kissmanga. it's suppressed me a lot ;D
Hope that they will changed after I post the version two.

@Maleckite

You have a common disease called "Lack of Pochinum and Tamanium", nano desu. In my page on facebook, there is a lot of images you won't find in other places because I myself edited them. If Portuguese isn't a bother for you, try recharge there: https://www.facebook.com/pg/animexnovel/photos/?tab=album&album_id=681698805557332
 
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Some more to add to Elhao

Page 3 and 5: Change wood to woods. Forest would be a better word here though.
Page 4: Just a bit longer until your highness the demon lord-sama is reborn.
 
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You dun goofed up on very first sentence
Don't work on TL alone, get somebody even without JP understanding to check typos
 
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So the origin story of her chest is that all her dream power went to her chest.
 
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@ultimatehaki
Thanks a lot ^^

@Arcara
I will see if anyone from my team can help me with it. The point is they are more skilled reading and translating than writing juts like me. But it won't hurt to give a shot.

@sketches

In her attempt to be a heroine she accidentally cultivated the Ancient Breasts Goddess Martial Art. So She has a Goddess Chest, not a Demonic Breasts like Satou thought
 
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@Raydnt so far in the webnovel, no.

He only bang the prostitute, not the girl thats with him.
Well, to him, they are still 'children'.
 
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@rudeus_greyrat Too late! Drug Addict Karina has been captured for memes.

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