Dekoboko Majo no Oyako Jijou - Vol. 6 Ch. 36

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I'd recommend writing around pronouns entirely, rather than using gender neutral ones. The moment I saw you use 'they', I immediately knew that it was a trap. For example, on page 7 you could have her say "Maybe it's love?" instead of "Maybe they really like him?" It would convey the same meaning without giving anything away or sounding awkward.
 
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I'd recommend writing around pronouns entirely, rather than using gender neutral ones. The moment I saw you use 'they', I immediately knew that it was a trap. For example, on page 7 you could have her say "Maybe it's love?" instead of "Maybe they really like him?" It would convey the same meaning without giving anything away or sounding awkward.
I did consider doing something like that, and in hindsight, it might’ve been funnier if I did, so I’ll probably update it to include that change at some point tomorrow.
 

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