Eiyuu-ou, Bu wo Kiwameru tame Tensei su ~Soshite, Sekai Saikyou no Minarai Kishi♀~ - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

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Aww yeah that's it girl. Dunk on that smug snake some more
 
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Muchas gracias por la traduccion

Spanish is not my native language but I hope the appreciation comes through.
 
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Finally someone that reincarnated but don't have the "For some reason I have to hide all my skills and appear useless" disease.
 
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I love how she perfectly blackmailed the key people into letting her have her fun.

@Zetyr I mean, they hid at least half their skills. But we know exactly why: because it's not fun if it's that easy.
 
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I love this, but making her 5 years old feels too wierd. A 5 year old has the muscle strength to fight like that against a 13(?) year old? Unless she's using ether for strength, but she made a point of not using ether, so...
 
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Your translation improved a lot! Was this improvement just from using machine translation? Most of the sentences had correct grammar but still had awkward wording. Some were perfect though.

It can still be improved but it's readable.
 
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muchas gracias por los capítulos y ntp que esta muy buena la traducción, al menos no sufrí para entender nada
 
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Wow. Thanks for at least uploaded the conclusion, lol. I think English is understandable for non natives speaker like me.
 
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@Magaso I mean, she wouldn't be able to work out much as a baby, and her muscles wouldn't be developed enough to even hold a sword for idk how long, but probably a while. Meanwhile, that 13 year old has probably been training for at least 5 whole years, and has naturally developed muscles and mass on top of that.

I mean, can a 5 year old actually train their body to that extent? Bodily control can be discounted, but I highly doubt the muscle mass and total mass of a trained 5 year old can stand up to the power of a trained 13 year old's muscle mass and total mass.

Anyway, if the author made her like 10, it would have been much more believable IMO
 
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Nice improvement! The typesetting has improved a bit since chapter one. But I would reccommend maybe using a different font, one easier on the eyes. Like, maybe hmm... MightMakesRight BB or CCAdamKubert. Centering and formatting of the bubbles definitely needs work though. Read through this, it'll help you a lot with typesetting. https://imgur.com/a/7fGWEhJ
 

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