Eroi Koto Suru Tame ni Kyonyuu Bishoujo Dorei o Katta Hazu ga, Oshishou-sama to Shitawa Rete Omotta Toori ni Ikanaku Naru Hanashi - Vol. 5 Ch. 21 - T…
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Sorry for the hiatus. The older chapters should now be updated, fixing some mistakes, adding some missing SFX, and making fonts more similar to the raw. I also removed color pages in the middle of the chapter since I found out they aren't allowed.
I'm still not certain about some comic grammar rules, but it should be serviceable. That's what I get for not using an all caps font. I did learn that "?!" is preferred to "!?" when emphasizing a question, but the raw uses "!?" and I like how it looks better. Feel free to issue corrections.
I did check to see if Shiina's ellipsis trailing of "chan" was consistent or symbolic in any way. I didn't find anything, but they should all be be corrected to "cha..." or "chan" as appropriate.
I'm still not certain about some comic grammar rules, but it should be serviceable. That's what I get for not using an all caps font. I did learn that "?!" is preferred to "!?" when emphasizing a question, but the raw uses "!?" and I like how it looks better. Feel free to issue corrections.
I did check to see if Shiina's ellipsis trailing of "chan" was consistent or symbolic in any way. I didn't find anything, but they should all be be corrected to "cha..." or "chan" as appropriate.
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Where does a nickname of an adventurer come... I don't know, if only there was a guild of some sort that handled adventurers, where you could ask such things. Especially made easier if you were part of said speculative guild, no? 
!? Definitely is more aesthetically pleasing than ?!, even if the exclamative should be last to imply the surprise/question being loud. Essentially why "!?!" is the loudest surprise.
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!? Definitely is more aesthetically pleasing than ?!, even if the exclamative should be last to imply the surprise/question being loud. Essentially why "!?!" is the loudest surprise.
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Return those glasses right now. Shiina-chan looks less good with them on. Story wise, it makes perfect sense though. They make her look bookish and not intimidating. But I'm disappointed. I was hoping for more of a cute girly look from her.
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No boing boing for Shiina-chan
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Shiina looks good in anything.
And if I have any advice, if you ever get a girlfriend*: She looks good in anything. Even if she comes to you wearing an inflatable clown themed fat suit she looks good in it. Even if she doesn't, she does. And you better well say as much.
(* that isn't meant to be a slight FYI, life is less complicated without)
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RETURN OF THE KING
Oh its alive, too bad this series ends in 10 chapters
Really would love to see more unique series like this with GL as in genderbend Non human short person(body is loli but I dont consider it) because that makes shit super interesting, so tired of MC always being a fucking Human in GL etc
Really would love to see more unique series like this with GL as in genderbend Non human short person(body is loli but I dont consider it) because that makes shit super interesting, so tired of MC always being a fucking Human in GL etc
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absolute yuri!
We need fillia and shiina hanging out more.
We need fillia and shiina hanging out more.
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Everyone has things they look good in or bad in. Everyone. The trick is to let them know that certain styles look bad, before they wear them in front of you. That way, you're not insulting them or hurting their feelings. Like preventing bad endings before they happen. And if they do end up still wearing said style, just say nothing. They'll remember what you said in the past. And the lack of positive comments speaks for itself.
That being said, me disliking glasses is a personal taste thing. There's definitely some people that like glasses.
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Hear, hear! I would love to see a girls' love story where the MC is a literal fairy. A tiny flying magical creature. And then have the main love interest be a normal sized girl. A large part of the story could be about them overcoming the physical size difference between them.Oh its alive, too bad this series ends in 10 chapters
Really would love to see more unique series like this with GL as in genderbend Non human short person(body is loli but I dont consider it) because that makes shit super interesting, so tired of MC always being a fucking Human in GL etc
I would also like to see a girl's love where the MC is an elf, and the main love interest is a human girl. Then have the story cover the MC's pain and sorrow at watching her love age and die before her; while she still has hundreds or thousands of years of life left.
Sounds great, I like the Fairy one alot
For me I would like one where its a genderbend Human girl Hero where they fuck/relationships with Important creatures like a Lovecraft creature, Or a Super important High elf, A dragon, etc etc
The other idea I thought of is MC is a weak human girl and she gets protected by Important Milfs who can be Creatures or Humans who have daughters/kids already so like "Mama Heroine ga Suki Sugiru" series where MC is the villain in a game but doesn't want anything to do with the heroines but instead the Milfs of the heroines instead
I think its rare asf to see a yuri series where the harem or love interest is Moms Especially when its mytho moms like a dragon, elf, demon, etc would be really cool to see imoSimilar threads
