Eroi Skill de Isekai Musou - Ch. 1

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Honestly, if there's a pretty girl who can knock out the MC or any guy, I'm favoriting it and rating it at least an 8. Please continue with this
 
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I thought we were past cliches, I thought this wouldn't indulge in retarded characters that are abusive for no reason. Way to ruin the first fucking chapter, autistic ass author.
 
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She’s the goddess that got pulled along due to him touching her I’m guessing.
 
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As n advice, check whenerver you use words in past tense in a sentence with "did"
Its "did you just say x?" not "did you just said x?"
The did makes sai'd' irrelevant.
 
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"Unique skill: Clicking the mouse rapidly with three fingers. To achieve this skill, I had to keep practicing over and over again through numerous games."

I guess this MC never heard of macro mice. They're not even that much more expensive than a standard mouse without macro capabilities.


This chapter really needed better proofreading. There were mistakes on nearly every page. "Let get right into it!" That's just one of many similar errors. Even worse is, "Did he just said... hero?"

Some pages even have errors in every panel, such as page six: https://images2.imgbox.com/5c/ac/sJ1SsM9H_o.png
 

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