I thought we were past cliches, I thought this wouldn't indulge in retarded characters that are abusive for no reason. Way to ruin the first fucking chapter, autistic ass author.
As n advice, check whenerver you use words in past tense in a sentence with "did"
Its "did you just say x?" not "did you just said x?"
The did makes sai'd' irrelevant.
I guess this MC never heard of macro mice. They're not even that much more expensive than a standard mouse without macro capabilities.
This chapter really needed better proofreading. There were mistakes on nearly every page. "Let get right into it!" That's just one of many similar errors. Even worse is, "Did he just said... hero?"