Too early and too little to give a judgement yet. At least the author seems to have something planned for the future. Art’s fine. Main character’s personality... nothing to do but wait and see how this is fleshed out.
I hope the "find the sister" climax isn't the trope: 'forced amnesia due to traumatic experience'.
I also equally hope it isn't asspull: 'kill the sister again because fuck happiness amirite?'.
umh fuck i really hope that the sister didnt reincarnate just to die again before he got there, coz u know hes an avenger, he cant just start a new happy life
I appreciate the effort for translating the story but... is that really what was said? (or are they doing the 'who is this place, where is my name' joke) Everywhere else is mostly fine though