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The Translation is low quality. It's an okay read, but knowing that better translations could improve my enjoyment of this hurts.
 
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Ah yes, the good old :
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Can barely even be called readable. The story is... Idk. The character writing is sht. I don't even know if they have personalities. Even the fkin mc doesnt have a personality like wth. Is this a bad adaptation of a novel or did a 2yr old write this.

Edit: even the 'erotica' part is bs. It is literally just a page of the girl naked and thats it.
 
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"Do you have yeast?" "What's that?"

[looks up the history of leavened bread]
...It's on ancient Egyptian hieroglyphs and specifically mentioned in the book of Exodus.

God damnit isekai authors, stop making your vaguely Late Middle Age (500-700 years ago) fantasy worlds strangely stupider than people from the fucking Iron Age (2000-3200 years ago). At least not without thinking of some rational reason why they wouldn't know stuff that people thousands of years before their time in our world did. Do some basic fucking research for once.

(No I'm not claiming that ancient Egypt and Exodus were necessarily in the iron age, they're more late bronze age; I'm saying that by the time of the iron age, the practice of leavening bread would have been already well-established and widespread)
 
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Wow! This is pretty close to the bottom of the barrel as far as storytelling goes. Bakery lady is like, we suddenly and for no explicable reason fuck now. Noble lady is like, I see you for first time, you get tongue in mouth now.

I recommend getting dental work for fun over reading this.
 
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My thoughs when reading : the pacing is sh*t ; it's about bread and one page of ero per chapter. Better stop early.
 
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Slightly okay trash.
Eat this junk food if you want, but towards the end the bad translations will end any interest you had.
 

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