Let's hope the author starts releasing longer chapters, 'cause that's how the raws are, unfortunately.![]()
I do get the reasons you need to cut in chapters but.. 11 pages are well too few. couldn't it be bumped up to 15 pages at least? please?
always Only 12 chapters and given a mystery or cliffhanger
Putting that aside, does anyone else think it sus how the vamp was saving those girls for later?Releases aside, that felt super rushed. One swing, one page of exploration, found the girls and then immediate cut to the aftermath through exposition.
That's some really lazy storytelling for the amount of build up to this point.
I feel that wasn't the main base for the captives.
He works as a gatekeeper yet he's incapable of reporting his findings and observations. Maybe he should find another profession, as he's clearly not suited for his current one.MENTION THE WEIRDNESS DUDE. THEY ALL TRUST YOU SO TALK TO THEM ABOUT HOW YOU FELT THAT WAS TOO EASY
The vampire probably converted a guy as a distraction and one or more of the hostages or is hidden among them or something
THIS holy shit this.He works as a gatekeeper yet he's incapable of reporting his findings and observations. Maybe he should find another profession, as he's clearly not suited for his current one.
He works as a gatekeeper yet he's incapable of reporting his findings and observations. Maybe he should find another profession, as he's clearly not suited for his current one.
“Something’s bothering you, isn’t it?”
“…You figured that out pretty well.”
“Of course, I did. After all, you’re my husband.”
Kaguya smiled as she said this.
“I don’t remember getting married… but you’re right, something is bothering me.”
“Hmm… and what might that be?”
“Well, it’s just a vague feeling right now… I’m still thinking about it.”
The image that comes to mind is of the hostages.
They were locked up as a reserve supply. I agree with that assessment.
But, it still bothers me.
“Hehe, even when you’re deep in thought, you’re wonderful.”
“Don’t tease me… I’m seriously thinking about this.”
<snip>
‘…It’s probably best to ask the church about the vampires.’
I wanted to believe the case was resolved.
However, if there’s even a slight possibility that something was amiss, it would be wise to investigate further.
I remember the next sequence is this kid is stripped 8- and sent to the prison, right it was winter in that movie.![]()
I do get the reasons you need to cut in chapters but.. 11 pages are well too few. couldn't it be bumped up to 15 pages at least? please?