Thanks for the translation. Many parts have been difficult to understand, but I got most of them. As others pointed out you (the translator) need a proofreader. The typesetting was really okay, but as also pointed out, you'd make a better impression, if you absolutely keep the pages monochrome within the chapter, if they have been monochrome to begin with. -> page 13 (I'm guessing, but could it be it was meant as a marker and you forgot about it?)
Again, ty for translating it. I like the story, too.