GraPara! - Ch. 129 - Ah… Ngh Ah… (Censored)

[John_Smith10]

I just read the Japanese comments on this chapter, and not a single comment went by without someone calling Sakura a slut 💀. The hate for Sakura in those comments is honestly on another level.

Where did you read them?

Post some screenshots do that we can enjoy their reactions as well, lol.

 

[yukuu3477]

Where did you read them?

Post some screenshots do that we can enjoy their reactions as well, lol.

https://pocket.shonenmagazine.com/title/02218/episode/439667

 

[deleted-user-bd0fb46e6a]

so author taking criticism positively wow we may get more of this from now 😭

If she actually takes the criticism seriously we could be in for some very interesting developments 👀

 

[2domi2]

@Mangamoz brought me here from a comment on the Casual chatting thread... Since I'm here, I went to check the author's X to see what's going on, and... there's not much there. The Japanese audience doesn't really like to shit on authors over there.

I did find this post from the author, though. She said it's her editor who chooses the chapter titles, and that she really liked this chapter title:

Bro some jp people were saying to the author it's a wonder she doesn't sell herself with her fetishes😭 wild work.

the author does looks like the zakari fmc quite a bit

 

[fvebuucx]

The only way I'll be angry is if the MC character forgives the FMC after this. Or if she just hides it and they stay together.

 

[Litreara]

Bro some jp people were saying to the author it's a wonder she doesn't sell herself with her fetishes😭 wild work.

the author does looks like the zakari fmc quite a bit

I took a look at the replies just now, and people have started shitting on the story. Maybe I checked too early.

 

[box2024]

so author taking criticism positively wow we may get more of this from now 😭

Oh the fall From that spot should be interesting she has written herself into a corner a doesn't even know it yet secret class author did the same thing.lol

 

[shinshom]

I doubt it lmfao

If Guilty Circle is still getting an update, then what more in this manga who have a bigger fan base than Guilty Cricle? This series will end up the same as Karami. All the blame will be thrown to Shinobu to feed the NTR enjoyers expect it to have at least 250 chapters lol

Some ppl on the industry are complaining that there is too much NTR around the medias hahaha.... its becoming a bigger problem than isekai lol

 

[box2024]

I doubt it lmfao

If Guilty Circle is still getting an update, then what more in this manga who have a bigger fan base than Guilty Cricle? This series will end up the same as Karami. All the blame will be thrown to Shinobu to feed the NTR enjoyers expect it to have at least 250 chapters lol

But have you noticed that after part one the author has to change who the fmc was?!

 

[Rafalga]

I think the definitive part of the whole ordeal will be that he quite successfully blown her mind with fucking. So as the nature of most NTR, she will return for more since just as most of her works, author doesn't really write her MCs as capable since she hates them all and all the other man just have endless stamina somehow (as most NTRman tends to)

 

[box2024]

I took a look at the replies just now, and people have started shitting on the story. Maybe I checked too early.

On X or at the official raw site ? I mean this is a manga built on ntr baits so it brings in 3 type of people the pure love types that don't want the ntr to happen the kind that don't really care if it happens and the degenerates that want ntr to happen that last type just wants porn they don't really care about the story the more degenerate the better. But once you jump the shark you divide your readers.

 

[nyoron77]

so author taking criticism positively wow we may get more of this from now 😭

He used to it alrdy ...

People critics but sell talk otherwise ...his most famous work even got live action and each adaption pretty much different kind of garbage that somehow lot of people digging into it

 

[box2024]

He used to it alrdy ...

People critics but sell talk otherwise ...his most famous work even got live action and each adaption pretty much different kind of garbage that somehow lot of people digging into it

It's a false trap that the author is falling into you won't see what the fallout is for 5 or 6 chapters NTR has diminishing returns which is why those stories tend to be so short they don't really work long term because it gets predictable every time it happens.

 

[Litreara]

On X or at the official raw site ? I mean this is a manga built on ntr baits so it brings in 3 type of people the pure love types that don't want the ntr to happen the kind that don't really care if it happens and the degenerates that want ntr to happen that last type just wants porn they don't really care about the story the more degenerate the better. But once you jump the shark you divide your readers.

On X:

さくらって人間的に何も成長してないよね
このまま他責思考のドブカス糞ビッチのまま忍や周りに何となく許されるゴミ展開になるのかな？

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Sakura really hasn't grown as a person at all, has she?
Is this just going to turn into one of those trash developments where she stays a selfish, blame-shifting, gutter-tier bitch, and Shinobu and everyone else somehow end up forgiving her anyway?

 

[Litreara]

so author taking criticism positively wow we may get more of this from now 😭

Now I'm wondering if this was more of a commercial decision than anything else... I'm gonna check the physical volume sales data on Shoseki Ranking to get an idea of how sales are doing, but does anyone know if the total number of copies sold so far has been released anywhere?

 

[box2024]

On X:

I have read more than a few comments on the official raw site that either word it just like that or carries the same sentiment I think GraPara has peaked.

 

[box2024]

Now I'm wondering if this was more of a commercial decision than anything else... I'm gonna check the physical volume sales data on Shoseki Ranking to get an idea of how sales are doing, but does anyone know if the total number of copies sold so far has been released anywhere?

Going by comment engagement it seemed the bait chapters did the best everything else barely got anyone talking. But if this was done to boost sales then it was short sighted.

 

[Litreara]

Going by comment engagement it seemed the bait chapters did the best everything else barely got anyone talking. But if this was done to boost sales then it was short sighted.

Yeah, I'm wondering if it was a Hail Mary move... Gonna run the numbers.

 

[box2024]

A commenter on the Japanese raw site said this is getting a serialized manga anyone know what that even means?

 

[DREAMER_JOE]

Finally author has done it. It's not that heart wrenching as I thought it would be. Maybe its because mc had sex with her before this happened. Or maybe because I read Karami Zakari before, which left me traumatized for months when I read it 2 or 3 years ago.