GraPara! - Ch. 129 - Ah… Ngh Ah… (Censored)

[THeVaSH]

"But his heart-racing dream days are short-lived as lecherous photographers, crooked managers, and sexually harassing producers start closing in on his "beloved Sakura-chan" one after another!! Can Shinobu protect Sakura-chan's virtue!?"

The answer is! NO! FUCK NO! WHAT DID YOU EXPECT! DUMBASS!

Honestly, nobody would have been upset if it had happened earlier, and if it had been done by a producer, director, or someone who had been involved with the show from the beginning. This handsome guy just showed up and slept with her out of nowhere. It's outrageous—129 episodes and it happens like that, out of the blue.

 

[THeVaSH]

THIS IS CHAPTER 5 . FORESHADOWED. It's not poorly written just admit people just don't like cheating in stories


The set up was right there too playboy confesses to Sakura , MC is busy with Fumi and doesn't even get it up for Sakura, misunderstanding happens and Sakura catches MC kissing Fumi which then gets her to cheat with MC. If you hate that well sucks tell me what would've been a better reason for Sakura to cheat. Besides SHE WAS ALREADY THINKING ABOUT OTHER GUYS COCKS FROM THE LAST ATTEMPT. Girl wasn't a saint

You're missing the point of the widespread anger; it's because of how rushed and absurd the situation was with this actor. If it were at least well-developed, no one would be complaining. The guy showed up and out of nowhere did what others had been working on for several arcs and episodes.

 

[THeVaSH]

THIS IS CHAPTER 5 . FORESHADOWED. It's not poorly written just admit people just don't like cheating in stories


The set up was right there too playboy confesses to Sakura , MC is busy with Fumi and doesn't even get it up for Sakura, misunderstanding happens and Sakura catches MC kissing Fumi which then gets her to cheat onMC. If you hate that well sucks tell me what would've been a better reason for Sakura to cheat. Besides SHE WAS ALREADY THINKING ABOUT OTHER GUYS COCKS FROM THE LAST ATTEMPT. Girl wasn't a saint

And obviously, she's not a saint, she's just very stupid (Sakura), well, that's how her author made her.

 

[Orpheus7]

You missed me pointing out the set up but that's how this story was written from the beginning tho

You're missing the point of the widespread anger; it's because of how rushed and absurd the situation was with this actor. If it were at least well-developed, no one would be complaining. The guy showed up and out of nowhere did what others had been working on for several arcs and episodes.

Guy shows up that has something to do with the work Sakura and/or MC is working on and guy tries to get with Sakura through the chapters/arc. The only difference in this arc is that the playboy finally got the w. I don't even think it was rush this guy was introduced a couple chapters ago and the reason why she cheated is built up from Fumi showing up.

 

[THeVaSH]

You missed me pointing out the set up but that's how this story was written from the beginning tho

Guy shows up that has something to do with the work Sakura and/or MC is working on and guy tries to get with Sakura through the chapters/arc. The only difference in this arc is that the playboy finally got the w. I don't even think it was rush this guy was introduced a couple chapters ago and the reason why she cheated is built up from Fumi showing up.

Even so, it felt rushed. Just like the chapter itself, in the previous one they went straight from Sakura arriving with the actor, to arriving at her apartment, and straight to sex. And in this one, straight to the action. It's as if the author wanted to unleash her innate and repressed desire to ruin her work. The foreshadowing is the least of it; we all expected this outcome, and although in your opinion, the difference is that this one achieved it, the story has lost its appeal. Now it's just another run-of-the-mill NTR story where the girl hides her infidelity from her partner while trying to fix things with him.

 

[THeVaSH]

Unfortunately, what's done is done. Now all we can do is watch this train derail and sink into misery. Let's goooooo!!!

 

[Orpheus7]

It didn't go straight to action. she texted the guy in the train, she went to his apartment, and they kissed. I would've been annoyed if it dragged with her crying to the actor about what she saw and what to do cause at the end of the day they were gonna fuck regardless (of course with a small slim chance of shinanegans) and we don't know what will happen next so it still retains it's appeal. Everyone is kidding themselves if they aren't interested in what comes next. If Sakura and MC find a way to forgive each other and still be together I'll admit that would suck.

I had my expectations low from the very beginning that's why I'm still enjoying this fun train wreck

 

[deleted-user-bd0fb46e6a]

Eh, let's not kid ourselves. Everyone knows this is going to turn into another Karami Zakari. She's going to cheat with the actor over and over again behind his back. Anything else would be a miracle

 

[THeVaSH]

Eh, let's not kid ourselves. Everyone knows this is going to turn into another Karami Zakari. She's going to cheat with the actor over and over again behind his back. Anything else would be a miracle

You know!

 

[THeVaSH]

It didn't go straight to action. she texted the guy in the train, she went to his apartment, and they kissed. I would've been annoyed if it dragged with her crying to the actor about what she saw and what to do cause at the end of the day they were gonna fuck regardless (of course with a small slim chance of shinanegans) and we don't know what will happen next so it still retains it's appeal. Everyone is kidding themselves if they aren't interested in what comes next. If Sakura and MC find a way to forgive each other and still be together I'll admit that would suck.

I had my expectations low from the very beginning that's why I'm still enjoying this fun train wreck

That appeal isn't what it used to be. You're fooling yourself into thinking it's worth it. I agree with one thing: if Shinobu and Sakura continue their relationship as if nothing happened after this, it would be disappointing. And there's a good chance she'll continue cheating on him behind his back. That's why I say there's a greater chance this will be just another run-of-the-mill NTR story, and that there will be a satisfying ending for everyone, both for those who like NTR and those who like rom-coms. Karami Zakari 2.0, Katsura Airi is a one-trick pony. A sad pony.

 

[hugorito420]

That appeal isn't what it used to be. You're fooling yourself into thinking it's worth it. I agree with one thing: if Shinobu and Sakura continue their relationship as if nothing happened after this, it would be disappointing. And there's a good chance she'll continue cheating on him behind his back. That's why I say there's a greater chance this will be just another run-of-the-mill NTR story, and that there will be a satisfying ending for everyone, both for those who like NTR and those who like rom-coms. Karami Zakari 2.0, Katsura Airi is a one-trick pony. A sad pony.

She will probably write a ending that they still being together but the ntr still happening behind their backs(only to satisfy both publics).I agree they still being together would suck but is not outcome that is really hard to happen(probably with ntrs still happening).at maximum a karami zakari ending.(they break up and move on).

 

[Deadstar230]

She probably gonna do an ass romantic end just to please the romcom public.

Ah yes, ‘Shinobu will always have my heart but the playboys and Ugly bastards will have my body’ what an amazing Romcom ending capable of contending with Hollywood acts.

I think it would be the worst ending to make Shinobu and Sakura end game after this chapter despite what a lot of people say could happen. Think about it, she’s a nympho, she doesn’t have a lot awfully in common with MC, she just loves what he does for her, and I don’t think she can go back to MC and look at him sexually anymore, especially after this chapter. And even MC, where he can’t go past round 1 with her and even fantasised about Fumi in the midst of getting on with Sakura. Meaning even he isn’t as sexually attracted to her. Foreshadowing where his heart truly lies.

Also let introspect the damage for a second here guys. The playboy fucked her all night (could be more on the next chapter), scattered and opened condoms along with tissues suggest they maybe went raw? And squirt stains on the bed. Everytime, MC and her get it on, it’s never as impactful as this, the Playboi has the backing of the blonde bitch and he has expressed heavy desire for her to break up with MC, the dicking she received emphasised it. And if you know NTR, the better sex wins. Yet people think:

‘Yea man, she will return to MC truss, all he has to do is forgive and sing Kumbaya’

It’s sounds like cope, I’m sorry. No matter what Airu does to spin it. It’s stupid af.

She might love MC. But will MC love her? Especially after he finds out her escapades? And we’re entering Fumi/MC arc, we don’t know how impactful Fumi is going to be on MC. Ik the next excuse is ‘What about Karami Zakari and her recent works?’.

If Airi copies and pastes Karami Zakari ending onto GraPara? She will be labelled a one trick pony devoid of creativity outside of that one trope. I doubt she will repeat. It will jeopardise her future works.

I say just feed Sakura to the NTR and depraved wolves and be done with her. No MC might feel sorry for her, stupid flashbacks, or ‘I actually miss MC’. Gone for GOOD. A woman out of MC’s mind. The eye catching premise of ‘Can Shinobu protect her?’ Is well destroyed, it’s a clear no. If she wants to appease the Romcom fans, she would make Shinobu end with Fumi. She will would probably continue to NTR bait her but she wouldn’t fall. Sakura is hated amongst both the Romcom and NTR fans alike for her to be given any sort of good ending. Sakura need comeuppance not a good ending. She needs to regret and MC and Fumi’s success is key to this. Airi is under the microscope with this one, if she fucks up the ending. She might as well join Illicit Love author in blacklisted works and stick to Hentai.

 

[deleted-user-bd0fb46e6a]

Ah yes, ‘Shinobu will always have my heart but the playboys and Ugly bastards will have my body’ what an amazing Romcom ending capable of contending with Hollywood acts.

I think it would be the worst ending to make Shinobu and Sakura end game after this chapter despite what a lot of people say could happen. Think about it, she’s a nympho, she doesn’t have a lot awfully in common with MC, she just loves what he does for her, and I don’t think she can go back to MC and look at him sexually anymore, especially after this chapter. And even MC, where he can’t go past round 1 with her and even fantasised about Fumi in the midst of getting on with Sakura. Foreshadowing where his heart truly lies.

Let’s introspect the damage for a second here guys. The playboy fucked her all night (could be more on the next chapter), scattered and opened condoms along with tissues suggest they maybe went raw? And squirt stains on the bed. Everytime, MC and her get, it’s never as impactful as this, the Playboi has the backing of the blonde bitch and he has expressed heavy desire for her to break up with MC, the dicking she received emphasised it. Yet people think:

‘Yea man, she will return to MC truss’

It’s sounds like cope.

Just feed her to the NTR wolves and be done with her. The premise of ‘Can Shinobu protect her?’ Is well destroyed. If she wants to appease the Romcom fans, she would make Shinobu end with Fumi. She will would probably continue to NTR bait her but she wouldn’t fall. Sakura is hated amongst both the Romcom and NTR fans alike for her to be given any sort of good ending. Sakura need comeuppance not a good ending. She needs to regret and MC and Fumi’s success is key to this.

„A happy ending? For a character like me? Wrong author, wrong manga“

 

[Edway89]

This is no romantic comedy more like a romantic drama. Author has no idea what she was trying to do.

 

[Edway89]

I'm surprise author has not locked up her twitter comments. Guess she used to all the hate and criticism and doesn't give a fuck no more.

 

[deleted-user-bd0fb46e6a]

Ah yes, ‘Shinobu will always have my heart but the playboys and Ugly bastards will have my body’ what an amazing Romcom ending capable of contending with Hollywood acts.

I think it would be the worst ending to make Shinobu and Sakura end game after this chapter despite what a lot of people say could happen. Think about it, she’s a nympho, she doesn’t have a lot awfully in common with MC, she just loves what he does for her, and I don’t think she can go back to MC and look at him sexually anymore, especially after this chapter. And even MC, where he can’t go past round 1 with her and even fantasised about Fumi in the midst of getting on with Sakura. Meaning even he isn’t as sexually attracted to her. Foreshadowing where his heart truly lies.

Also let introspect the damage for a second here guys. The playboy fucked her all night (could be more on the next chapter), scattered and opened condoms along with tissues suggest they maybe went raw? And squirt stains on the bed. Everytime, MC and her get it on, it’s never as impactful as this, the Playboi has the backing of the blonde bitch and he has expressed heavy desire for her to break up with MC, the dicking she received emphasised it. And if you know NTR, the better sex wins. Yet people think:

‘Yea man, she will return to MC truss’

It’s sounds like cope, I’m sorry.

She might love MC. But will MC love her? Especially after he finds out her escapades? And we’re entering Fumi/MC arc, we don’t know how impactful Fumi is going to be on MC. Ik the next excuse is ‘What about Karami Zakari and her recent works?’.

If Airi copies and pastes Karami Zakari ending onto GraPara? She will be labelled a one trick pony devoid of creativity outside of that one trope. I doubt she will repeat. It will jeopardise her future works.

I say just feed Sakura to the NTR and depraved wolves and be done with her. No MC might feel sorry for her, stupid flashbacks, or ‘I actually miss MC’. Gone for GOOD. A woman out of MC’s mind. The eye catching premise of ‘Can Shinobu protect her?’ Is well destroyed, it’s a clear no. If she wants to appease the Romcom fans, she would make Shinobu end with Fumi. She will would probably continue to NTR bait her but she wouldn’t fall. Sakura is hated amongst both the Romcom and NTR fans alike for her to be given any sort of good ending. Sakura need comeuppance not a good ending. She needs to regret and MC and Fumi’s success is key to this. Airi is under the microscope with this one, if she fucks up the ending. She might as well join Illicit Love author in blacklisted works and stick to Hentai.

The illicit love author got blacklisted? Wow
Idk would Airi really get blacklisted for only writing NTR? With that sentiment she should’ve been gone after the manga adaptation of Karami Zakari. in her defense, obviously there was a source material so she couldn’t or wouldn’t make too many changes

 

[Deadstar230]

„A happy ending? For a character like me? Wrong author, wrong manga“

MC remaining single is a good ending. Anything but him associating with Sakura or becoming a cuck is a good ending.

Hell, give him an NPC wife for all we care.

 

[Deadstar230]

The illicit love author got blacklisted? Wow
Idk would Airi really get blacklisted for only writing NTR? With that sentiment she should’ve been gone after the manga adaptation of Karami Zakari. in her defense, obviously there was a source material so she couldn’t or wouldn’t make too many changes

Tbf Illicit Love is way worse than Karami Zakari. Zero IQ was put into that manhwa. The author either quit or renamed. Cause people really hated that author. The Koreans really bullied the author. Plus the author stole scenes from other works

 

[Edway89]

Tbf Illicit Love is way worse than Karami Zakari. Zero IQ was put into that manhwa. The author either quit or renamed. Cause people really hated that author. The Koreans really bullied the author. Plus the author stole scenes from other works

Illicit love was a retelling of her personal experience with her husband, I should say ex. They were both cheating on each other.

 

[Edway89]

The illicit love author got blacklisted? Wow
Idk would Airi really get blacklisted for only writing NTR? With that sentiment she should’ve been gone after the manga adaptation of Karami Zakari. in her defense, obviously there was a source material so she couldn’t or wouldn’t make too many changes

She won't. We know there is a market for NTR ( female readers mostly). She will alienate those who came for romcom, though.