GraPara! - Ch. 133 - A Sultry Night (Censored)

[THeVaSH]

Yeah sure, but it doesn't matter how much you shit on her writing as long as long as you keep continuing to read it.

Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't know I couldn't give my opinion/critique of something I'm reading, whether it's good or not. I guess it's better to let the author think everyone loves what she writes.

 

[THeVaSH]

I heard that the publisher is the type to sometimes force the ntr even when the authors don't want to. I also heard that the ntr in destiny lovers were Retcon and that both women ended up married to their boyfriend's, I also heard that the author was forced to put in the ntr stuff by the publisher

in the case of Destiny Lovers, yes it is. That's why the author tried to fix it, but the damage was already done.

 

[slyss]

Giggling at how some people still believe Mangapoke and Kodansha somehow won't let Airi get away with whatever bullshit she wants to pull.

The same Mangapoke that let Gal Cleaning happen (It's not like the mangaka uploaded it in isolation; It still went through the approval process and all that, and they let it happen)

The same retards that let Juujika no Rokunin get milked to hell, that let Hirose Shun do that weird-ass-confusing NTR in Fukushuu no Kyoukasho that also made a lot of buzz (This page became quite the meme in the JP community back then), that's still letting Guilty Circle run wild because the shit somehow still sells, and so on and on.

And let's not even talk about all the bullshit Kodansha lets fly over at Yanmaga, lmao.
The staff at Yanmaga is outright obsessed with Katsura Airi, to a really sad degree.

 

[Edway89]

Gave us an entire chapter of Sakura and other dude having sex, while Shinobu having sex with Fumi ain't even up to half a chapter and is underwhelming in comparison. That should tell you which couple she favors and how eager she is for more NTR

 

[BegoneThoth]

Can the producer's word choice be misconstrued? He wants to strip Fumi down and have her bare it all as in giving her character in the movie more edge. Not literally have her get naked. Because ultimately what he was saying doesn't flow as easily into "I want to get those honkers out" as "The previous movie she was a flawless angel, now add something more visceral." This could end up having the script resembling the script in My girlfriend's friend.
Although it would juxtapose Fumi and Sakura, it could be that Sakura's storyline is being used to make us believe that's what's going on.
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So Sakura's not getting into Shinobu's next project after all... Huh. Guess this is going to keep going for a while. Oh well.

Thanks for the chapter!

He is going to end up directing her in a sex scene, isn't he?

I'm wondering if that will be how Sakura gets back into contact. Maybe she's a body double or is brought in as a replacement. I'm thinking like how My girlfriend's friend had an in-universe script change.

 

[master-34]

Giggling at how some people still believe Mangapoke and Kodansha somehow won't let Airi get away with whatever bullshit she wants to pull.

The same Mangapoke that let Gal Cleaning happen (It's not like the mangaka uploaded it in isolation; It still went through the approval process and all that, and they let it happen)

The same retards that let Juujika no Rokunin get milked to hell, that let Hirose Shun do that weird-ass-confusing NTR in Fukushuu no Kyoukasho that also made a lot of buzz (This page became quite the meme in the JP community back then), that's still letting Guilty Circle run wild because the shit somehow still sells, and so on and on.

And let's not even talk about all the bullshit Kodansha lets fly over at Yanmaga, lmao.
The staff at Yanmaga is outright obsessed with Katsura Airi, to a really sad degree.

I heard the author of gal cleaning changed the entire plot because his work was cancelled and he was having a mental break down

 

[Darklight99]

Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't know I couldn't give my opinion/critique of something I'm reading, whether it's good or not. I guess it's better to let the author think everyone loves what she writes.

You can critique whatever you want, but I hope you learn that Katsura Airi couldn't give less of a fuck, hell she's definitely enjoying this.

 

[Rafalga]

Here we go. 1-2 Airi special. It is fucked before it can even start. Are we sure they are not working in porn industry?

 

[Gravtos]

You guys need to realise that Katsura Airi lives for the hate, people hate-reading her stuff doesn’t matter if they’re still reading it. The worst thing would be apathy, but fake delusion keeps you guys from dropping this. you guys are just like NTR protags who think their girlfriends would stop cheating on them this time, they wont. Cutting it off and moving on is the only option.
guys hoped that Sakura’s career souls go to shit, and it only got better, you hoped that Sakura would be in despair but she’s actually having a lot of fun, be sure that Yuma definitely is also living his best life.

Yap she doing from the start the more hate we have on some charaters best stuff happens and for favorite character its pure pain and despair stuff. She writes on feedback for each character on it so ya kinda bad writing after ch 102 it's going downhill pretty fast.

 

[VuongOuki]

Will Shinobu move in with Fumi, I wonder? It seems that after their night together, the next day (or a few days later) they happily went grocery shopping together, and he continued to stay overnight at Fumi's house. Also, I want to have a chapter 133.5 depicting what happened after Fumi's kiss on page 8; it seems she had already 'flipped' her lewd switch at that moment and wanted to drain Shinobu dry, haha. Shinobu seems to have gotten over his breakup with Sakura; he thrust inside Fumi so decisively without any unnecessary thoughts.

 

[favine]

Man, at least dude did not get ED and legit clapped cheeks.

No idea what author is doing, but I feel a fumble is coming.

 

[master-34]

So far it looks like non of the authors mc's are as bad as the mc's in these ntr story's were the characters are on an abandoned island or are trapped in a abandoned mansion in the middle of nowhere the ntr guy then starts to rape the mc girlfriend wife or harem and instead of trying to save them the mc Masturbate to them getting raped

 

[zalagires]

knowing the author ,
she tend to sideaway former female main character and raise side heroine.

why its remind me of Kimi no iru machi...

 

[SS-2010]

Sincere question for you guys. I believe the author surrendered to betrayal solely because of a fantasy she has. However, I saw that the general public hated this and also began to hate the female character. Do you think the author is taking this into account and preparing a positive response for the audience, such as making the protagonist come out on top morally?

Many readers believe the author was pressured by the publisher to revise the story so that the character Sakura wouldn't become even more hated.

So, the chapter 132 and 133 were twisted to imply that Sakura didn't actually date the fuckboy by showing that she shared the same fate as Mio and Nagi : being rejected by Shinobu and then having a one-time sexual encounter out of spite, without pursuing any further relationship with those men. Do you think it's a stupid or wise solution?

However, this solution, Sakura is single and still in love with Shinobu may resolve the original issue but it creates a new one as people now fear that Sakura might harm Shinobu. LOL

There is no trust in Airi Katsura (sensei) who is the author (not illustrator) at all. LOL with sadness.

 

[SS-2010]

Ladies and gents. This is why I have low expectations for this author. They continues to show that, even when they write pure shit... they can still go lower. Fumi, it was nice. Sakura, eat shit. You all, next week same time.

You're not alone. No one trust Airi Katsura (sensei).

 

[nadhir10]

guys, considering what this trashy author wrote before it's not going to end well, drop it here where things are good because it will end with FMC living a happy life where MC chasing her shadow

 

[SS-2010]

Not really. That panel showed the girl looking curiously at sakura. The words exchanged are usually just supportive by nature, but women tend to do that and still contain their doubts. Think about it, Why would they brag about liking him right in front of her after she revealed he was a cheater? Nobody would admit to that if they truly believed the dude was trash.

If you do believe the author is clever, I'll buy your idea. Hope you're right. I don't want Grapara to be a shallow story as it's been.

 

[SS-2010]

Only thing worthwhile from that meeting was seeing some of Sakura's internal thoughts and how she still found it fun when doing her best with Shinobu. She'll likely accept this new project since her drama has wrapped up apparently and it'll potentially bring her face to face with Shinobu in their work.

I’m genuinely happy for you because you're the only one who believed in that 0.1% chance that Sakura wasn't dating the fucboy. And now it looks like you're right because the author is convincing her readers that Sukura shares the same fate as Mio and Nagi : having sex just once after being rejected by Shinobu, without ever taking things further with those guys.

 

[SS-2010]

Yea I'll admit I was optimistic. That's what I get for having such a thing in a KA story lol

Nagi had an impact, just not in the way we were hoping for lol

Sorry to forget that, besides @diphuc1 , you’re also another one who still looks at the bright side.

Agree that it’s a real shame about Nagi. She wasn't utilized effectively. She and Mio were just to show that Sakura didn't pursue a relationship with that fucboy. It’s like Airi Katsura (sensei) using a sports car to race against a bicycle. LOL

 

[Darklight99]

Giggling at how some people still believe Mangapoke and Kodansha somehow won't let Airi get away with whatever bullshit she wants to pull.

The same Mangapoke that let Gal Cleaning happen (It's not like the mangaka uploaded it in isolation; It still went through the approval process and all that, and they let it happen)

The same retards that let Juujika no Rokunin get milked to hell, that let Hirose Shun do that weird-ass-confusing NTR in Fukushuu no Kyoukasho that also made a lot of buzz (This page became quite the meme in the JP community back then), that's still letting Guilty Circle run wild because the shit somehow still sells, and so on and on.

And let's not even talk about all the bullshit Kodansha lets fly over at Yanmaga, lmao.
The staff at Yanmaga is outright obsessed with Katsura Airi, to a really sad degree.

While I agree with you, nothing of this sort happened in Gal Cleaning, in that it was a rape attempt on a love interest that was thwarted by the MC, The FMC wasn’t even involved. So, don’t compare Gal cleaning to this, even that was way better than this.