Genuinely painful translation. I understand going for an effect or slang not translating well, but it's overdone. Stop shoehorning aged "modern" english slang everywhere. It's like watching an out-of-touch elderly person pretend to be trendy. It also won't age well.
It's okay to use the original japanese terms or speech patterns. You aren't catering to "normies" here on mangadex dot org (or maybe you are).
Otherwise pretty good art, but recycled dogshit premise with no weight behind it. The MC might as well be a cardboard cutout with generic loser qualities stapled to him.