"Hitokiri" Shoujo Koushaku Reijou no Goei ni Naru - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

[yanderecoverl]

Interesting. Our mc just gay panicked, I hope that she'll get more attached to our mc

 

[stanvillainess]

the last panel got me laughing my ass off

 

[ori-yoru]

Pretty all over the place. Fun concept but feels super rushed and the combat frames are very unclear. The blushing at random moments doesn't work, I think most people would probably even miss it. The pacing is like a dream, flowing from one idea to the next without much cohesion. This could have benefited from a more methodical start, rather than this chaos.
Edit: I get it now. This was written by someone who has no idea how humans interact. Everyone feels like a robot with no personality. It's jarring.

 

[Toon_Jay]

"Looks like he's been... disarmed!"
..."I get it!"
"Shut it Nappa"

It's funnier when you know that it's not even their joke xD The dub actually had Vegeta say "hmph... he's been disarmed" with a smirk on his face, and TFS was just referencing that.