Translation could use help in places (eg, "how should I kill him?" is likely correct literally, but the connotation in context is much closer to "how should I destroy him?") and this group's hyphenation is all over the place as usual, but the story is just so well put together, especially for something that started out as a one-shot. The art's great and so much more expressive than BL is usually willing to be. Don't let the first couple chapters fool you into thinking this is nothing but fluff though-- there's a really great couple of noncon scenes that would be right at home in a much darker manga.