i love every single thing you did about that whole lost in translation bit. i personally prefer the more literal translations, but i get that it's not best for everyone, so clean scans with TL notes at the end is always the best. ON TOP of that, you showed the bubble by bubble comparison, explained the original joke, and picked a nearly perfect replacement. really, i don't think i've EVER seen nearly two full pages replaced like this without it feeling off, but it worked here. maybe because you saved the TL for the end while usually big changes are mentioned within the chapter. thank you guys.