I Gave Birth to the Villain's Child - Ch. 5

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Mom comes charging in to slay the fools who made her baby cry in 3... 2...
 
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I was about to say he is pretty well adjusted for a child that saw his mother being abused for the last [and all 3] years of his life,

then he starts crying over nothing like a normal child.
 
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The only secret a 4 year old can keep is the one you don't tell them lol. I bet this will last maybe 1 chapter
 
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Oh my, the Duke looks way better in this chapter, if the artist continue working hard probably the roast to the Duke's looks is gonna chill uwu
 
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nice beginning, it will be nice to see how it develops.

...too bad the MC didn't just kill her father. rather than get broken, wouldn't it be better to quietly choke him in the night and inherit the whole place and title? she'd have a fortune, a title, lands, and no one would even mourn the old bastard.

i hope the duke will take the revenge for her in the end if she won't or can't.
 
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@misto713 chances are in that society women can't inherit so it'd just go to an uncle or something. Which may end up worse plus if she murdered him she'd likely be executed for the murder of a nobleman.
 
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@garnzlok only if she got caught... also, not mant are worse than someone who would murder his own mother and sell his daughter for money. also... the next bastard might either be more cautious after the previous 'master of the house' quietly 'passed away' in his sleep. or he'd not be cautious and end up the same.

but i do understand that she has to suffer for 'the plot'. i just wish these heroines would stand up for themselves more often. and she had such a good start too what with getting knocked up so she can't be sold anymore...
 
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I don't have much of an opinion of this now, it'll depend on future chapters but if I were to state what I like and dislike :

+ I like the MC's "don't give a fuck as long as my son is happy" attitude
- The ML's cliché "don't expect love from me" and "she'll come begging, it must be a ploy to get my attention" bullshit
+ The kid is cute and smart
- The kid is a little too smart for his age
- The MC had a major hole in her plan, like what did she expect ? The father that was willign to sell her to become father of the year just because she was pregnant ? If anything, the author went for the best possible outcome since he could've truly sold her to a brothel and got the kid in an orphanage . She made her position weaker by having the kid because instead of needing to protect herself, she added another being that needs protection.
- The ML notices immediately that the kid resembles him but for the sake of the plot, the author made this supposedly smart guy let go of that fact and not further investigate
+ So far, the staff aren't the cliché "The master doesn't love you so we'll treat you like shit even though you stand way above us"
- Telling your child who is 2 years old (I read that he searched for her for 3 years since they slept together so he should be 2) that he can see his father daily but never tell him because of a curse is stupid and cruel. The kid would feel extreme pressure and he can never be happy with the guy and also it's stupid to tell that sort of major secret to a 2 year old when kids are basically unfiltered up to the age of at least 8 or something... I have a major gripe with this
 
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I totally forgot (until reading the comments) that the boy is 2 years old 😳--- like that kid is 5 at minimum just from the way he talks & walks & conducts himself....well anyways I would still die for him

Thanks for these chapters!! I was cracking up at ur little notes along the way too lol
 
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+f poor thing 😂 He's adowable !

Thank your for the chapters ! Definitly going to check the novel now (edit : even if the plot has its flaws indeed, but hey ! If they were all smart the story would have only lasted 3 chapters !)😘
 
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I really do love this kid. He may technically act a little cliche but at the same time, he's definitely not since he's actually a child in this story, and not a miniature adult. I also find that children in these stories seldom have actually personalities and their personalities and decisions are led by plot convenience. In this story, this kid actually seems like his own individual.
 
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When was the last time I saw a person cry again? How do I handle this??!?!?! Oh yeah be nice and reassure him that it's going to be fine
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