I Won't Be Breaking Off This Engagement. You Know That, Right? - Ch. 1

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Not exactly the story route i thought this would take! BUT IM FOR IT. Instead of a teenager, the FL is actually the same age at that point in time, so she literally doesnt have the mindset to come up with a lie, which made things take an interesting turn.

While i luv the characters falling in luve while the mc is oblivious, thus route is cuter too.

The Mc (who is the orince this tine) is more concious of what his actions will lead to. Yes he technically fell for the protagonist first, but he was engaged to someone else, and she was raised from that point to be his wife.

Thats alotta mental weight, so it's always understandable when the villianess' o off the rails (be it they aren't just awful people at the start) ut the Prince character usually overlooks that since he was never raised to live up to his fiancess standards and has the option to reject.

This time he very conscious of the situation of his fiancee.

I still wanna see a story where the one who's isekai is the male lead, or like second prince, and the villianess is his type so he stays with or snatches her up.
 
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Serea's poor ability to translate her visions to Shin, plus Shin's easy acceptance of Serea's descriptions despite zero knowledge of the very concept of video games, make this a harder read than it should be. I mean, I GET the premise that a Golden Ending for that world requires Serea's sacrifice of status, but the author could've written Shin more believably. This entire story relies on Shin's reactions to Serea's words, and I feel the author (or mangaka, in case it's actually the adaptation at fault and not the source material) goofed it.
To best give my criticism weight, I will be writing an alternate take on how Shin's acceptance of Serea's visions could've been structured better and link it here so that you can see what exactly I'm griping about.
I'll still read this story, but mainly to see if Shuriigan x Bell happens.
 

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ah the prince that admits that in that game he was a jerk, nice
 
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this is so refreshing to have an insight of what the prince thinks about the whole situation and how he wants to deal with it! this is def worth a read, can't wait for the next chapters!! the plot is at times really funny, I had a good laugh when the fl started to tell him the whole otome game story and how he reacted was such a sight lmao. sometimes, it's fluffy and cute. bet, when they grow up, it gets more romantic uwu
 
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@LittleMiniMe actually a popular villainess manga did it too, you may be interested ^^ it's called An Observation Record of my Fiancée - A Self-Proclaimed Villainess: https://mangadex.org/title/26359/jishou-akuyaku-reijou-na-konyakusha-no-kansatsu-kiroku
 

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Bertia is pretty much over anyway. Nice to know we have round 2.

Also Serea seem to have more brain cells than Bertia.
 

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