The story is interesting (Well... The imortal killed by enemy/ex-allies who come back in time and encounter some old ingured rich martial artist that he heal 10 sec after he come back... starting story already read 10 times...) but Fuuuuu the way the MC speak is soo tiring... For me he look like the living definition of a japonese "Chunibyo" (Wikipedia) ... Everytime he speak I want to edit the text to make him look less strange and crazy...
I won't criticize this much, since it was clearly written by someone who is mentally challenged, but of the many manhua I've seen with this exact same setup, this is the worst and the most poorly written. It might have been written intended for little kids or something.
Well as a comedy, it's pretty good everything mc says is just funny, because it's not fitting in situation, as a story it's normal rebirth OP mc that taking down all those arrogant idiots, but still recommended, ejoyable.