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The problem with the story is that the MC comes off as sexist at times, rather than simply have comedic overreactions. His disdain and ocassionaly violent rejection of the men and women who violate his preconceived notions are the most visible show of this. His overreaction and the disjoint between they are acting compared to how they "should" be acting are meant to be comedic but I don't think that the author has quite managed to pull it off.