Dex-chan lover
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That internal monologue "gotta pray" got me. The mangaka straight up lied to me. If he wouldn't have done that I would have assumed she is faking it. But by using an internal monologue for that, I thought, "Ohhh God! AGAIN? REALLY?!?" I like it, when an author is able to fool me, but that was just really far beyond the rules. Don't tough inner thoughts. If you do, you can't trust anything in a manga anymore and every asspull becomes feasible.
Also good, that the white healer kid/gran-pa got freed. The priest and church came out of it to unhurt for my taste. Sure, many lives are dependent on that church, but you still have to replace the upper echelons or else... What will happen, if Demon Lord, the Black Healer and even the White Healer state, that the church is corrupt?... That church might collapse, but how many people will stave in turn?
Well, right now the church takes all those dependant people as hostages.
Also good, that the white healer kid/gran-pa got freed. The priest and church came out of it to unhurt for my taste. Sure, many lives are dependent on that church, but you still have to replace the upper echelons or else... What will happen, if Demon Lord, the Black Healer and even the White Healer state, that the church is corrupt?... That church might collapse, but how many people will stave in turn?
Well, right now the church takes all those dependant people as hostages.