Is She Making Fun of Me? - Ch. 7 - Tina and utta

[MangaDex]

 

[NawarDagher]

Link to the new donation page to help the series continue:


https://app.lava.top/nawardagher

 

[Tillman12]

I love Tina. She’s a bit of a rascal, and I think she gets smacked not because her friends are delinquent, but because she always tells jokes that cross the line

 

[xanon]

I think Tina is discovering something about herself.

I cracked up on Tina's page two thoughts...especially the "I would actually like her to bully me ~"

 

[Yuri_Enjoyer_Deluxe]

Failing Upwards, thats the Girlfailure way, almost gives Bad Girl vibes...

 

[BusinessDude_ShadeDealee]

Is it me or the art just got much more refined

 

[iamalvez]

more Yuri!

 

[NawarDagher]

Is it me or the art just got much more refined

Trying things here, do you like it?

 

[EchoGirl]

'high school' needs a space out. And while i do use it casually when typing, maybe have 'tho' lengthened to 'though' but no worries if you wanna have it be a more relaxed vibe in grammar

Lesson you? Is it meant to be listen? or is she failing at saying "i'll teach you a lesson" lol

I like the thick hair tho surprised she doesn't have a ribbon or accessory in her side ponytail to make it look more like it's tied than an attachment but that's just me being nitpicky lol

 

[Hohogamer]

Tomoko and Ucchi are a great base for a side romance

 

[otyugh]

@NawarDagher So glad you could find something better and moar donors \o/

To me the art is always top notch and IDK what to say of it but "more, go wild" on this part ; the part that miiight get limiting in this work (to me) is the risk to stay glued at "fun oneshot episodes" instead of having an articulate "story/background/characters that makes sense" (but not doing that too is a valid, no problem with it, I just read dozen of them each week and even if they're nice they're not the one I'd be taking going on a lone island ~)

 

[NawarDagher]

'high school' needs a space out. And while i do use it casually when typing, maybe have 'tho' lengthened to 'though' but no worries if you wanna have it be a more relaxed vibe in grammar

Lesson you? Is it meant to be listen? or is she failing at saying "i'll teach you a lesson" lol

I like the thick hair tho surprised she doesn't have a ribbon or accessory in her side ponytail to make it look more like it's tied than an attachment but that's just me being nitpicky lol

Thanks for the feedback i edit the pages and update them , and yeah she is failing at saying “i will teach you a lesson”

 

[NawarDagher]

@NawarDagher So glad you could find something better and moar donors \o/

To me the art is always top notch and IDK what to say of it but "more, go wild" on this part ; the part that miiight get limiting in this work (to me) is the risk to stay glued at "fun oneshot episodes" instead of having an articulate "story/background/characters that makes sense" (but not doing that too is a valid, no problem with it, I just read dozen of them each week and even if they're nice they're not the one I'd be taking going on a lone island ~)

Yeah i get that , and you would like the future chapters

 

[EchoGirl]

Thanks for the feedback i edit the pages and update them , and yeah she is failing at saying “i will teach you a lesson”

no worries. without being over the top gyaru (unless ppl like that style like the decora kei accessories), some hairpins that show off their personalities could be good

and maybe some subtle easter eggs of maybe a side chara or two wearing like matching hairpins or bracelets or so if there's hints of others in relationships XD

love how she's like "i'll bully someone but i draw the line at being racist" but i guess more of a tsundere-wanna be yankee versus actually toxic

also, page 5 form -> from (and not sure if it's stylized on purpose but shouldn't Utta's name be capitalized in your title too?)

 

[NawarDagher]

no worries. without being over the top gyaru (unless ppl like that style like the decora kei accessories), some hairpins that show off their personalities could be good

and maybe some subtle easter eggs of maybe a side chara or two wearing like matching hairpins or bracelets or so if there's hints of others in relationships XD

love how she's like "i'll bully someone but i draw the line at being racist" but i guess more of a tsundere-wanna be yankee versus actually toxic

also, page 5 form -> from (and not sure if it's stylized on purpose but shouldn't Utta's name be capitalized in your title too?

thanks for the double feedback , also tenda and alva always wear the same pink bracelets , i even made then big so you could notice

 

[Dreamtiy]

I'll gex you