1) Velder is a pretty decent dude. Realist, not overcome by extreme faith. I like that. Thought he was a bit of a braggart and too brash before, but this definitely puts him in a very positive light for me.
2) Not bad translation work,
@halendor ! It's immediately obvious that English isn't your first language, but not in such a way that it's hard to read or understand; you obviously understand the ins and outs of English, but have a few missteps with grammar and missing determiners that probably don't exist in your mother tongue, to which I can only suggest getting someone who has English as theirs to give your script a quick edit pass. Even then, they're minor enough that it only interrupts the flow of reading, not really affecting the understanding of what is being said.