Isekai de Skill wo Kaitai Shitara Cheat na Yome ga Zoushoku Shimashita: Gainen Kousa no Structure - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[Antonius]

Would be nice if someone could fix this chapter. It's considerable out of order.

 

[Liquidxlax]

poor girl wanted to get pounded but got cock blocked

 

[blablablah]

So ancient chanting turns [Light] into [Atomic Flashbang] it seems.

 

[DarkFlame]

that's some long spell 😶

 

[Reshfan]

damn its hard to type with only one hand and the other holding a bowl of hot noodles

 

[Glomoro]

Her chant mentions the sun, and giving praise. Why has nobody done this yet?

 

[FireFish5000]

There is no flow in this chapter. If these pages arn't out of order, then the author has a screw loose in his head.

 

[Kaarme]

@firefish5000 The mangaka is terrible at composing a good flow, that's for sure. The editor is equally terrible at advicing the mangaka. Assuming there is an editor.

 

[Duskit2]

Them thinking that he has a another rare skill merely because he had sold them one rare skill seems like a stretch to me.

 

[Rel_]

Is she really that dumb? Oh were hiding from the people that is trying to kill us, let's make out. Like wtf!!! Like that's a good idea

 

[yeetmaster6981]

What is going on I'm so confused

 

[Axccel]

The first chapter gave us no reason for him to listen to the voice in his head or to get kicked out of the castle.
This chapter gives us no reason for these thugs to be after him as they have no reason to believe he has a rare skill or something like that. And in fact, because they are rare, they have every reason to believe he already sold the only one he had.

I think this writer doesn't know what cause and effect is.

 

[RandomReader2023]

This chapter pacing was very confusing and the elf girl made no sense, like seriously girl, there's a group of thugs trying to catch you and your master and all you think about is doing the deed? Talk about horny, lol.

Btw with this much destruction and this big light the probably blinded everyone in that neighbourhood, It'll be a miracle if the King don't order for his prison.