Isekai Kaeri no Yuusha wa, Dungeon ga Shutsugen shita Genjitsu Sekai de, Influencer natte Kane wo Kasegimasu! - Ch. 9.2

[MangaDex]

 

[Phyto]

slime mucus and medicinal moss is good. thank you for the translation

 

[cryum]

Pre-cast or Cast Blizzard in advance instead of cast foresight.

Medicinal moss and slime mucus are fine

 

[Oklam]

Slim mucus and medicinal moss sound better

 

[phorx]

Bring on the harem and a class change, this kid needs a win to get out of that shitty class. The teacher was cute but laughing at him openly is totally fucked up.

 

[lolfacesayshi]

Yeah the terms are fine as is

And I'm glad that he just nopes outta class, instead of indulging the idiocy like all the other stories of this kind.

 

[Antairan]

I see there has been a noticeable improvement to the grammar, but there's still quite a bit of wonkiness present in many text bubbles.

There's a very big abuse of the -ing termination (present continuous) which is quite bad
There is also a general lack of articles in most sentences as well
Finally, many sentences display plural or singular uses when the opposite should be used

All of these errors can be fixed using chatGPT by telling it to "correct the following sentences so they use the proper grammar, morphology, and syntax". So it shouldn't add much work to what you're already doing, simply add that prompt at the beginning of the instructions given to chatGPT and it should do it for every subsequent input you give it.

Regardless, as I said before, it has improved overall, though this chapter somehow had a dip in the english quality, not sure why unless you did something different compared to previous chapters.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

Edit: As for the terms, I think "Slime Extract" would work better than "liquid" or "mucus", as for the moss, "Medicinal" sounds better.

 

[ciera]

Thanks for the update

 

[loonacrunch]

give me the princess bro.....

 

[KingDiego]

thx for tl

 

[LoliTobrut]

I see there has been a noticeable improvement to the grammar, but there's still quite a bit of wonkiness present in many text bubbles.

There's a very big abuse of the -ing termination (present continuous) which is quite bad
There is also a general lack of articles in most sentences as well
Finally, many sentences display plural or singular uses when the opposite should be used

All of these errors can be fixed using chatGPT by telling it to "correct the following sentences so they use the proper grammar, morphology, and syntax". So it shouldn't add much work to what you're already doing, simply add that prompt at the beginning of the instructions given to chatGPT and it should do it for every subsequent input you give it.

Regardless, as I said before, it has improved overall, though this chapter somehow had a dip in the english quality, not sure why unless you did something different compared to previous chapters.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

Thank you for the critic and suggestion, so that is a proper way to use chatgpt.
I just use "make it sound better" or "make it sound more natural".
I'm using google translate to scanning the text and translate it in chatgpt, i think the low quality one is when i'm not using chatgpt and try fixing the grammar by myself

 

[PlasmaLance07]

Bring on the harem and a class change, this kid needs a win to get out of that shitty class. The teacher was cute but laughing at him openly is totally fucked up.

Teacher was cute, but a bitch... he should've just shown them how strong he was to prove them wrong

 

[LoliTobrut]

slime mucus and medicinal moss is good. thank you for the translation

okay then, you're welcome

 

[LoliTobrut]

thx for tl

you're welcome

 

[LoliTobrut]

Pre-cast or Cast Blizzard in advance instead of cast foresight.

Medicinal moss and slime mucus are fine

got it , thanks

 

[pandatime]

Dungeon Croquettes lol

 

[Seinvolf]

Thank u always for ur good work...
^^...

At least his mentality already high enough to ignore them, but still a random mental attack really can make a dent on his defense...
XD...

 

[mrclamp]

Oh boy. 3 transfer students!? He gonna have a harem, isn’t he? And the CF gonna be left out (and as she should be). I do wonder if we ever see the princess again.

Also I loved his line about how he had no interest in real girls…about sums about his character when it comes to interacting with girls lol.

 

[AnotherDuck]

Yeah, the usual looking down on the superficially useless MC.

Well, that's the right choice. Go to the dungeon, show some results, and laugh at them.

Out of all things that mixes fantasy dungeons with modern life, I think those sterile locker rooms sells it the most. For some reason, I find that more surreal than the rest.

And now, Cooking With DTJK!

People like scenes where you mess up. Even if it's only a bloopers segment at the end. It lessens the distance between the video creator and the audience, because you're showing a more human side.

If you have a lot of moss, wait a little and sell a bit at a time when the price is high. Good way to get some extra cash from it.

And time skip. What I wonder is if he showed any results to the class, and whether they treat him differently.

"At that time I never thought..."

That's the laziest foreshadowing that exists. But in this case, it's only obvious stuff anyway.

I think slime mucus works better than slime liquid (or extract), and medicinal moss.

 

[LoliTobrut]

And time skip. What I wonder is if he showed any results to the class, and whether they treat him differently.

spoiler alert:

i dont think it will happen soon, atleast in the next few chapter

think slime mucus works better than slime liquid (or extract), and medicinal moss.

yeah, the other one is much more simpler, but the mucus and medicinal works better