...Urgh. I have a feeling this will not click well with me. First of all, the mc has access to internet. If there's something I hate, it's still having a connection to your former world when in a new one, especially an extremely intrusive one like that where you can buy stuff and browse the web. Feels way too half-arsed. The second thing I really hate is that the mc is a smoker. That's just disgusting in so many ways. Other than that, the story feels kinda lacking and can't pull me in. It feels wrong in some way, the mood is weird.