It All Starts with Playing Game Seriously

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I deliver to you all a better, actually legible (and not MTL) version of the summary. Plz, punctuations are important.

One born as an ant out to have will and ambition. Fate has not yet been determined; each of us are a black horse. When the game [Yuan Jie] descended into reality, players gained the ability of their in-game characters. As such, the world became chaos. Liu Yi — forbearing, ambitious, yet afraid of fighting— time travels to an era before the game had become reality. Armed with the knowledge of the future, starting from the bottom to overcome his fear of fighting, Liu Yi rises up to the top, ultimately becoming the Saviour and resolving the crisis of the apocalypse.
 
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Is this translated right?

In chapter 1 the game is launched in 2030. In this chapter it says the game is launched in 2020.

He got 100% proficiency in just 5 minutes which requires 10,000 hits. He'd have to hit the target 33 times a second.

3 years from now he got killed by level 20 players and he is still level 1. The game became real in under two months. It took players just a few days to reach level 20.
 
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We've got to admit you need to be some king of a genius to unintentionally create so many plotholes and bland characters in just 3 chapters.
Here is our MC, he is hardworking guy with acute sense of justice and he is likely to remain as such for the rest of the story. If you make MC ideal from the start you don't need to introduce character progression - it is widely known fact among chinese authors.
Our guy has a sister, who is ... sister. Who cares about her personality, right? She is here just to be cute and give MC some motivation and weak point.
Here comes the girl, a rare beauty, who is interested in our bland MC. Why? Because author wants so.
 
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This is borderline parody. Seriously you cannot open with the death of a sister on literally the first page, it's like a joke. Plus the art is pretty naff and the story is paper-thin.
 
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https://screenrant.com/sword-art-online-playing-game-seriously-manga/amp/
I came here after reading this article.
 
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Its good so far, but the character is really over powered with a sprinkle of character development.
I kind of hoped he wouldn't have entered the level 30 battle with lightening strike, because he recognizes that there is a limitation to what he knows and doesn't know. And from knowledge from his previously life shows that it was unbeatable for high level players before that also had ki. I wanted him to come back to it later, and have more of a growth arch, meet some new characters that add onto the plot. Yadda yadda, then comes back. Starts fight, first slash catches him off gaurd, per current storyline, but he refocuses as the current chapter 7 unfolds, but the difference would be that he gets really close to dying. And what keeps him going is the advice he gets from a higher level player with ki, that may or may not have also reset their own life for the game.

I guess some more failure would help, but not a total reset to his levels, because then the added on drama that currently resides, will f him harder than any combat. Making him not only a target for higher players, but casuals as well. He won't be the hero of the story anymore, if gone this route, he'd end up the villain where when he is at the moment where he thinks he's going to save his sister, he's actually the reason why she's going to die.
 

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