Jimoto no Ijimekko-tachi ni Shikaeshi Shiyou to Shitara, Betsu no Tatakai ga Hajimatta. - Ch. 46.1 - The battle of two begins

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This is just to spend my boredom, but you're doing it once again with your line breaks.
  • activiti-es -> activi-ties
  • su-ch a dow-ner -> such a downer (downer can be on the next line)
  • Ch-eer -> Cheer (why bother hyphening such a short word?)
  • Ma-mitsu-ki -> Mamitsuki
  • sel-ls -> sells (seriously again?)
  • toge-ther -> to-gether (In page 2 you did it right...)
  • wi-th -> with (one short word again)
  • succes ful -> success-ful (forgot the hypen here.)
  • celebriti-es -> celebri-ties
  • y-ou -> you (NAH BRO! This is even shorter!)
  • litt-le -> lit-tle
  • so-me -> some (please, stop...)
  • actual-ly -> actually
  • ne-ver -> nev-er
  • se-en -> seen
  • entrepre-neur -> en-trepreneur
  • sc-hool -> school
  • sor-ry -> sorry (sometimes you can use it as one word and sometimes with hyphens)
 
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Ah yes, the classic we were broke, poor, and struggling to get by. So once we struck it rich we're so blinded by the fear of returning to being poor and destitute that we forget what it is that's really important to us. An old trope but not necessarily a bad one.
 
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So we're finally at the stage where each character's major personal and family issues are going to be resolved - time for some interpersonal developments.
 
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"My dad was killed in a freak tandem bike accident, but now I have to ride one to save my friends relationship with her dad!"
 
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This is just to spend my boredom, but you're doing it once again with your line breaks.
  • activiti-es -> activi-ties
  • su-ch a dow-ner -> such a downer (downer can be on the next line)
  • Ch-eer -> Cheer (why bother hyphening such a short word?)
  • Ma-mitsu-ki -> Mamitsuki
  • sel-ls -> sells (seriously again?)
  • toge-ther -> to-gether (In page 2 you did it right...)
  • wi-th -> with (one short word again)
  • succes ful -> success-ful (forgot the hypen here.)
  • celebriti-es -> celebri-ties
  • y-ou -> you (NAH BRO! This is even shorter!)
  • litt-le -> lit-tle
  • so-me -> some (please, stop...)
  • actual-ly -> actually
  • ne-ver -> nev-er
  • se-en -> seen
  • entrepre-neur -> en-trepreneur
  • sc-hool -> school
  • sor-ry -> sorry (sometimes you can use it as one word and sometimes with hyphens)
It's legit a curse to be made aware of this, It's impossible to ignore now.

I have a feeling some are done out of pure spite since there are so many comments about it. That's how I justify it to myself anyhow.
 

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