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batcrap insane from page one to page 198. i dropped this a while ago and decided to pick it up again just recently. i know why i dropped it. right before the actual demon ghost lady there were warning signs that it was going to get real stupid, which it did. Ive had awful experiences investing my time in stories that undo all the progression in a split second. Thankfully this time the worst it got was unbelievable, and in a sense i guess that's business as usual.
with all that said all it needs is a little tweaking and the ending is good as gold.
for people that having read it yet, do it. expect the stakes to be low even when the author insists it isnt. pretty much everything is in service of a joke. the characters are consistent enough that there won't be any "but why" moments.
moral of the story is as follows
"dont expect a great story, just laugh at the characters"
10/10