Kaikosareta Kyuutei Renkinjutsushi wa Henkyou de Dai Nouen wo Tsukuriageru ~Sokoku wo Oidasareta kedo, Saikyou Ryouchi de Slow Life wo Ouka suru~ - V…

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feels like there's gonna be an invasion of the slowlife location at some point
 
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Thank you for the translation and you have excellent handwriting compared to mine!
 
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Thanks for picking this up.

Some corrections/advice:
On the first page, you're missing an "are" (or, rather, the " 're " in "you're") in "you're already here?"

I also noticed that in every instanced save for one of Mercia saying "Isagi Sama", the "sama" part wound up being on a separate line. This ends up looking really weird, so you should probably try to keep that as one unit when typesetting. Additionally, most groups I've seen tend to use a hyphen for japanese honorifics (e.g. "Isagi-Sama" instead of "Isagi Sama"), which generally looks a lot better. I recommend that you start doing that too, and it might even help you with keeping the "-Sama" on the same line as his name.
 
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Thanks for picking this up.

Some corrections/advice:
On the first page, you're missing an "are" (or, rather, the " 're " in "you're") in "you're already here?"

I also noticed that in every instanced save for one of Mercia saying "Isagi Sama", the "sama" part wound up being on a separate line. This ends up looking really weird, so you should probably try to keep that as one unit when typesetting. Additionally, most groups I've seen tend to use a hyphen for japanese honorifics (e.g. "Isagi-Sama" instead of "Isagi Sama"), which generally looks a lot better. I recommend that you start doing that too, and it might even help you with keeping the "-Sama" on the same line as his name.
Thank you, you cleared up a lot of stuff i wasn't sure about
 
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@IstyManame - Thank you for your continued work on this series! So fast as well!

I appreciate it and I look forward to your continued works!
 
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Thankful for the translation, but dunno why are you releasing the chapters like this, is fine if the source is in splits as MD allow that, but you are splitting the splits, this is still part of 1.1 with only 4 pages left out bruh
 
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Wow, the Chief Alchemist guy is stupid, not knowing that feeding your army is super important... how stupid can they be in that martial society?
You underestimate bureaucratic ineptitude and bandit mentality. No food? Bonk neighbors, steal food, get military prestige/achievements, career goes up, retire with bitches. Why spend money on something that takes time to grow if you can just loot the enemy’s stock?
 

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