Kaisha to Shiseikatsu -On to Off- - Vol. 1 Ch. 4

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I think "as I thought, I passed this person before" for page 15 would suit better since he (she? the lolita) already questioning about that before in page 6
 
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"How to dress like a punk for 800-fucking dollars." Wherever punk fashion had a shred of class consciousness, it ain't here. Then again the Ramones were a boy band. I guess I'm rankled because I was a thrift store punk, not a mall punk.
 
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This chapter missed the mark for me, likely because a lot of it was recycled from the original. The lack of dynamicism in the character poses makes the dialogue feel...stilted :aquadrink:

Hopefully this is the last time we'll see it
 
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The biggest sticking point in this story is the fact that neither of them seem to recognize the other's voice despite working together.

Either Clark Kent syndrome or the Japanese are all born with a built-in voice synthesizer.
I assume that he did voice training and I believe that he already recognized her thanks to the smell last chapter, but idk how confident he is on that
 

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