Everything looked good as far as natural English goes - scan quality seemed more than serviceable, as well.
Thanks for uploading this, and putting in the effort. I've missed this series greatly, so seeing it starting up again is a breath of fresh air. And I've never not known you to do quality work, so seeing your name attached to the chapter upload honestly made me excited.
Especially with how light this chapter was. Even with Sheena's sudden reckoning with the taking of another's life (even if it was a "practice target" and not another living(?) being), the gaiety of her and Mimi's interactions in the classroom and in the bathhouse were revitalizing.
They're so close to being sent off to real war now, that it feels like these moments are all on a clock. And that's assuming there's not something deeper & darker at play behind the war itself, that these girls are being sacrificed to.
But it would seem Sheena has officially decided on her calling, and others are now starting to take notice. Would that she were allowed to focus entirely along that path, and not be forced into these combat sorties and mock battles along with all of the others...hers is indeed a rare magic, tending to emotional and mental hurts as well as physical. With how gentle she is....I hope she can find her space helping and healing and saving others, and not be forced to take life, herself.
I just hope they get as many moments to smile and hold one another as possible. Each shared heartbeat needs savoring.