Kiraware Majo to Karada ga Irekawatta Keredo, Watashi wa Kyou mo Genki ni Kurashiteimasu! - Vol. 3 Ch. 17

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Marriage arc when?
this story badly needs a rewrite from the little bit going forward left to adapt, like 4-5 chapters if theres no extrapolation.

like the marriage is literally a paragraph like the author ran out of page budget. for a 252 page novel
 
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Wait, we confronted the populace multiple times, completed a full "You Should Keep Your Distance From Me" arc, realized her feelings of love, and baked cookies all in one chapter? My face is being blown back by the g-forces of this narrative
Next chapter seems to be a makeup chapter.
 
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Oh, we're admitting it now? Nice.

I wonder why she thinks her magic would run out, though.
Since she was born without magic, plus the somewhat recent feeling of exhausting her magic a couple times, is making her consider the possibility. But the real reason that she hints at is that it is just an excuse to perform the busy work to distract herself from missing Dee.
 
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I know that Marietta is naive and honest to hell, but can she and 'Dee-sama' at least make a cover up story? Like Marietta is the twin sister of the evil witch and been hunting her twin for so long and finally able to kill her or at least able to drive her away for the moment.

Yeah, i know building trust from a lie is bad thing, but at least they could avoid the unnecessary hatred and complication.
 
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Huh, why doesn’t this a romance tag? Even if it’s unrequited/doesn’t work out in the end I feel like charas that have a virus or straight up say “Ive fallen in love” would be “enough” for it to be added esp since shoujo fantasies with FLs tend to be romance leaning too
 

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