Koi to Utatane - Vol. 2 Ch. 14

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You're changing the font too much, and font size is inconsistent. Stick with one font except for shouting, even that can be covered with bold+italic version of same font, and other bubble types. As a beginner use wild worlds, and always double check your mistakes.
 

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hana and kiichi are cousins. Not
clear first or second cousins, but they have the same grandmother. They get married in the epilogue
 

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Big thanks to Apt-Get and Danknny! This chapter looks much cleaner than the previous release - now we just need to correct the glaring grammatical errors and we're peachy.
 
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Good thing the school nurse gave the thorough diagnosis. No need for a specialist. Like could a bone be damaged or fractured or something.
 
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@Hurgh Yeah calling a 12 week healing time is a serious injury. This is a fishy diagnosis at best. If it would be a sprain it ain't taking that long. A swelling would be gone in a week more or less. For something to be that long it would be a tearing or rupture or trauma of the bone. E.g. hospitalization needed for the time being. Guess the author and editor never had different injuries to compare healing time and just went along with a bad guess or didn't even notice that it is way of.
 
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I like this a lot, slowly things keep pilling up. Tho i feel like Aikawa will surely give a push to Hana. Nothing like feeling jealous to realize something is up.
This cute end plus the ring finger bandage felt lot like they've been married for a while. But im still curious of their past. Hana seems to get really sensitive in this situations like she did when he had a cold. Maybe something happen to him in the past?
 

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