Dex-chan lover
- Joined
- Jan 27, 2018
- Messages
- 721
The commentary from the peanut gallery is miserable.
wtf that's also their work????You know I'm going to take a moment to bring up something I learned recently. Not only did the author create this unique piece of literature, they also created My Web Game Wife Is a Popular Idol IRL. Now the art of that one is more cutesy but it works well & the story isn't bad (feel free to disagree with me). How did the writing get worse when they made this? Idk but at this point I'm reading this for the scans team & see how worse this will get. At least the author is consistent on their MCs changing their minds. Thanks for the translations.
While this work isn't exactly the best, is pretty much the difference between how each adaptation been treated, this one is a rushed mess that have skipped so much context and dialogues that it doesn't make any sense, while the other is going at a normal paceYou know I'm going to take a moment to bring up something I learned recently. Not only did the author create this unique piece of literature, they also created My Web Game Wife Is a Popular Idol IRL. Now the art of that one is more cutesy but it works well & the story isn't bad (feel free to disagree with me). How did the writing get worse when they made this? Idk but at this point I'm reading this for the scans team & see how worse this will get. At least the author is consistent on their MCs changing their minds. Thanks for the translations.
Poor guy? dude. He's an asshole, who blew up on a girl who was a child, and who was a victim just as much as he was. After her parents kill themselves leaving her to pick up the pieces.N o NO AUTHOR PLEASE DONT PEER PRESSURE THIS POOR GUY JUST STOP THIS SERIES AND MAKE A CUTESY ROMANCE WITH THE CHILDHOOD FRIEND.
I'd say your profile image basically sums up how this story is fed to the audience.The commentary from the peanut gallery is miserable.
at least the live action was good!this is literally even if this love disappears tonight's plot
Ah sorry mate this story seems to give me some brain damage the quality of my comments seem to reduce every chapter thanks for clearing things up tho.Poor guy? dude. He's an asshole, who blew up on a girl who was a child, and who was a victim just as much as he was. After her parents kill themselves leaving her to pick up the pieces.
He comes along, and destroys her life, and guilt trips her. Who at the time was a child, who didn't mind control the car to kill his family. Lets not forget the childhood friend who rejected him , for no reason. Then he tried to kill himself. He should have done it. She would have lived on at least. Her life would have been better off without this garbage mc. Author be on drugs.
the writing is bad in that one but it's like a junk food kinda bad if that makes sense. This however is a whole other beast...You know I'm going to take a moment to bring up something I learned recently. Not only did the author create this unique piece of literature, they also created My Web Game Wife Is a Popular Idol IRL. Now the art of that one is more cutesy but it works well & the story isn't bad (feel free to disagree with me). How did the writing get worse when they made this? Idk but at this point I'm reading this for the scans team & see how worse this will get. At least the author is consistent on their MCs changing their minds. Thanks for the translations.