Kouchuugun Shikan Boukensha ni Naru - Ch. 56

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I think this series is getting cancelled which is why the pacing is so breakneck. If not, then a lot of this is pretty inexcusable and I say that as a fan who read the LN.
1) You don't show the relationship development between Alan and Cleria? Are you insane? That was what made the early chapters work so well what are we doing???
2) I don't know why Alan is playing these games, this clergy shit is more trouble than it's worth. I guess it's because he wants to have popular opinion on his side before he makes reforms, but given that he can literally drone strike this asshole from the other side of the planet I don't know what we're doing here.
3) This is the point where Alan not telling people the truth starts to look absurd. Hi, please look at this holographic display. Oh don't worry about it, it's just highly advanced magic :meguu:
4) I'm just gonna say it, getting intimate with Cleria while still maintaining this deception is super gross on Alan's part. What the hell dude.
4) To be fair, he tried to tell her many times. She just refused to know.
 
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Feels like there was a lot of time in between for the events to happen for this chapter but the author hasn't shown anything to prove it.

One thing for sure is, the story is getting rushed that it might it hit a wall with its current acceleration.
 
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Feels like there was a lot of time in between for the events to happen for this chapter but the author hasn't shown anything to prove it.

One thing for sure is, the story is getting rushed that it might it hit a wall with its current acceleration.
With how big of a goal the MC has and the fact that the Bugs won't show up for like 6 or more centuries, I was kinda hoping we would have gotten a generational epic like JoJos Bizarre Adventure. With a new MC from the same family per part and generation.
 
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With how big of a goal the MC has and the fact that the Bugs won't show up for like 6 or more centuries, I was kinda hoping we would have gotten a generational epic like JoJos Bizarre Adventure. With a new MC from the same family per part and generation.
That is a better route if they intend to go far with it but seems like they broke the gas pedal and decided to go with the flow.

It would have been better if they took some time to further develop their other stuff but the author is leaning too much on the politics and expects that sci-fi will fix everything.
 
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With how big of a goal the MC has and the fact that the Bugs won't show up for like 6 or more centuries, I was kinda hoping we would have gotten a generational epic like JoJos Bizarre Adventure. With a new MC from the same family per part and generation.
Nah, this story isn't that wide scoped. I still want to see more of the current characters.
 
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In the stories' defense, Alan has tried to tell her and she actively denied wanting to know up until this point.

It's not great writing but it does let Alan off the hook somewhat.
IMO, this done Celia dirty. Her development had always been taking more responsibility. Now she's claiming she wants to live in ignorance?
 
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I dont get this manga man. It looked like it was gonna be a couple of flash forward chapters and then a hopeful ending where the Galactic Empire meets the descendants of the Starveek Empire. Instead, this manga continues on?? No thanks...
 
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It’s not like getting pregnant should be a surprise to him right. Did he forget about the sex? Lotta important steps.
Nanom should've been able to tell whether or not she would've gotten pregnant if they did it. The AI is forcing fatherhood on him

or maybe the goddess, we really don't know. They can't measure interference from her
 

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