Koujo Tensei: Densetsu no Dai Madoushi (♂), Hime Kishi to Narite Densetsu no Reijou Kishidan o Tsukuri Musou Suru - Ch. 14 - I am also tempering my b…

[Hazuka90]

underwear Made by mithril with 100kg 💀

 

[xpsox]

Her underwares were made with special heavy metal fiber.

 

[Exzyeed]

If she sits on anyone their pelvis is gone

 

[PinkManiac]

I was expecting this to have gone one of two ways. As we saw with the tacks being smooshed, or her doing an air chair above the tacks for training.

 

[randalthor20001]

The translation has a few awkward sentences. There are some sentences where the meaning is changed to the exact opposite of the original. And there are also sentences where its hard for the reader to be sure what is being said.

"I've been tasked to locate a fresh, out-standing talent by father."
The use of "a" implies she is looking for a single person. When we know from the sentence preceding this one, and previous chapters, that she's trying to establish a female knight order. In other words, multiple women. Please remove the "a" from that sentence.

"Holds many things I pique my interests-"
This should be;
"Holds many things that pique my interest-"

"Something even more interesting than the cuisine of the royal court!"
This should be:
"What's most interesting of all, is the cuisine of the royal court!"
or:
"What piques my interest most of all, is the cuisine of the royal court!"
or:
"Something more interesting than that, is the cuisine of the royal court!"
or:
"The cuisine of the royal court!"
That last one seems short, but it fits perfectly with her previous thoughts from the preceding page: "But above all else...!"

"When I see some-one eating this much of food is pigs!"
Remove the word "of" from the sentence. It's awkward sounding and doesn't belong there.

In other good news, the next chapter releases in two weeks instead of the previous handful of chapters being every three weeks.

I went back and checked the chapter out of curiosity. I see that you fixed every single one of the above sentences. You sir, are a scholar and a gentleman. Thank you.

 

[Squidco42]

The whole premise is kind of wonky.

They're claiming to try and preserve the school's dignity because the princess is bringing it down. But she hasn't really done anything to do so. Like she has perfect manners, she topped the entrance exam in academics, and the only reason she used physical force in the practical was because they sealed off magic usage. Like she's been shown to be a bit eccentric at worst.

Meanwhile the "dignified" school has the principal try to force royalty to fail because of an inane reason, has the student council actively harrassing and attempting to harm students as a completely normal thing, and allows rando students to publicly insult royalty.

The only thing that's kinda saving is that her reputation before coming to the school wasn't the best.
Remember, not a lot know how she basically single handedly stopped the coup led by the former prince.

All they know is that she is a rambunctious tomboy who puts shame to the idea of lady nobility.

The whole nation itself is also prejudice against female warriors and is very conservative.

 

[Thynkus]

Muscles so insane if she sneezes while doing the deed say goodbye to your Johnson

I'm ready

 

[Zet1502]

Bullying by thumb tacks on chair, ah that takes me back.
The moron who tried to bully me was also perplexed when it didn't matter to me.

Did the moron get his ass handed to him?

 

[legendaryswordsman]

Too bad for them our princess isn't just physically dense but also a bit mentally dense.

In other good news, the next chapter releases in two weeks instead of the previous handful of chapters being every three weeks.

That's good to hear I'll look forward to more of the dense princess

 

[legendaryswordsman]

How about you getting jailed for contempt of bullying this kingdom's princess, instead!



Thank you for the update!

Yeah considering who she is they are pretty stupid