@FudoMasamune some corrections:
page 2: "All is fine now." -> "It's fine now." or "It's all OK now." or "It's alright now."
page 3: "I'm the one who were about to be killed back there, Eru." -> "I'm the one who was about to be killed back there: Eru."
"We're just happen to be passing by, don't mind it-" -> "We just happened to be passing by; don't mind it-"
page 4: "Oho... So it was this young lady with strange outfit who save us I see." -> "Oho... So it was this strangely dressed young lady who saved us I see."
page 5: "On the matter of orc back there, yes that was me." -> "If you mean the orcs back there, yes, that was me."
"Assuming you didn't come to help us, we and Marina's party who escort us might ended up killed." -> "Had you not come to help us, we, and Marina's party escorting us, might have been killed."
"Thankfully you arrive in time." -> "Thankfully, you arrived in time."
"Nevertheless to be able to defeat orcs effertlessly yet," -> "Regardless, to be able to defeat those orcs so effortlessly... yet,"
page 6: "We have not meet for one year, you've grown up..." -> "It's been a year since we last met. You've grown..."
"Father still have some works to do, so he remain in town." -> "Father still has some work to do, so he is still in town."
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there's more, send me a message if I should continue.