Font looks nice.
Sfx addition is good but don't overwork yourself redrawing them, especially ones that easy to deduce, even without you translating them. Thanks for the chapter.
Fonts snd everything is quite good tnx for the TL! about the SFX I don't know, I personally do not even notice them in most cases so I vote for letting them be and not waste time
Bro is about to introduce his new GF to family xDDD