Kusobitch na Gal Ane o Wakaraseru Hanashi - Ch. 1 - Sense of Distance

[CulR]

Ok this is the author's chance of redemption & now has a clean slate for this manga. Certainly we will have civil discussions & that the author learned from the pre-serialization on what not to do while keeping the serialization a "I can fix her" kind of story. Plus it will be a wholesome one about a step-siblings becoming a family after resolving the misunderstandings. Right everyone?
Thanks for the translations.

Edit: I forgot to mention that I'm positive there won't be any Fanbox content that will worsen the overall story & piss people off. We can all rest assured that the pre-serialization is just something we can joke & meme about in the future. Right?

did he mess something up before?

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

did he mess something up before?

Loooooong story short: Untagged NTR behind a paywall. You're punished for assuming it's a touching romance and supporting the author.

P.S.: She.

 

[DaBoySwag77]

I know English isn't your first language so let me explain this in a way a foreigner can understand:

We're talking about this chapter.

MC loves her like a sister.

If MC is going to love her like a woman, that happens later.

If she does the gangbang when MC only loves her like a sister, it's not NTR.

Cut the crap on this shit. Dont tell me you believe in this mental gymnastics like some cucks or tge retarded author does lol. My english is fine dude, perhaps my grammer is not perfect but I can understand perfectly fine, thank you very much.

THIS chapter plays out like the original one, with the difference its more paced out, thats it we know so far as the real shit starts later. If you dont believe me open the leaked stuff on nhentai.

The author has an editor, NTR was averted for now, and the tagline at the end of the chapter implies that maybe the sister is just misunderstood. Like, maybe in this version, she's just moody, and the family is assuming the worst. We saw her with a tag stuck to her pants. I bet you assumed she stole the pants, just like I did. Maybe the author put that scene in, and then it'll turn out she bought them and forgot to take the tag off, for example. Imagine dying your hair, getting some piercings, and suddenly even your own "brother" is calling you a "Dirty slut", even though you're a virgin or something.

Even if she has one, I dont see how that should somehow stop it from diverting from the original. Like mentioned above: NTR is a thing in japan, its a female author + the publisher dosent mind this trash.

Again I dont understand how you say that NTR got averted when the real stuff happens in next chap. Up to this point we got just some background information since its not a short comic but a manga now.

I did not put much though into the tag on her pants as its to early to have some assumptions with the knowledge we had prior with the original. She could stolen or buy it to impress the cool kids (you know whom kek), or like you said, she is just moody and missunderstood if the story diverted from its original.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

A

Cut the crap on this shit. Dont tell me you believe in this mental gymnastics like some cucks or tge retarded author does lol. My english is fine dude, perhaps my grammer is not perfect but I can understand perfectly fine, thank you very much.

Are you sure about that?

THIS chapter plays out like the original one, with the difference its more paced out, thats it we know so far as the real shit starts later. If you dont believe me open the leaked stuff on nhentai.

Because I told you right here

Telling me (The guy who translated the other version) what happens in that other version is a waste of time.

That I'm the one who translated the other version. You can even see my name on every single upload for the story. I'm also the guy who uploaded it all to Nhen, and then went out of his way to turn all the chapters (SFW and NSFW) into a single, coherent entry. Why are telling me what happens? I'm explaining that the brother isn't romantically interested in this version. Even if everything else goes exactly the same way as before, it's not NTR anymore.

Even if she has one, I dont see how that should somehow stop it from diverting from the original.

If you don't know how the brother not being interested makes it not NTR if she has sex, you don't speak English, or Japanese.

 

[DaBoySwag77]

A

Are you sure about that?

Because I told you right here


That I'm the one who translated the other version. You can even see my name on every single upload for the story. I'm also the guy who uploaded it all to Nhen, and then went out of his way to turn all the chapters (SFW and NSFW) into a single, coherent entry. Why are telling me what happens? I'm explaining that the brother isn't romantically interested in this version. Even if everything else goes exactly the same way as before, it's not NTR anymore.

If you don't know how the brother not being interested makes it not NTR if she has sex, you don't speak English, or Japanese.

• Yes
• And I explained to you its the same
• If you want to apply the mental gymnastic be my guest, but I think since you pretty well was here from the beginning when it happend, it still counts as NTR. By your logic, a "romance" story who focus is of the FMC fucking different guys only that at the very end the MC starts having feelings for her, is not a NTR themed/focused story.
• Again, "hE dOsEnT hAvE fEeliNgS fOr hEr yEt!!?! sO iT dOsEnT cOuNT!" Bruh you gonna explain me why a bunch of people still see it that way lol.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Y

If you want to apply the mental gymnastic be my guest, but I think since you pretty well was here from the beginning when it happend, it still counts as NTR. By your logic, a "romance" story who focus is of the FMC fucking different guys only that at the very end the MC starts having feelings for her, is not a NTR themed/focused story.

Yes. That's exactly how that works.

Again, "hE dOsEnT hAvE fEeliNgS fOr hEr yEt!!?! sO iT dOsEnT cOuNT!" Bruh you gonna explain me why a bunch of people still see it that way lol.

I don't know that anyone but you feels that way.

 

[DeadToReal]

@BuyVelomobiles

Oh, how I missed reading your arguments on this shitty story. Can't wait for those hearts to appear on her eyes in chapter 2.

Glad I decided to check back on the original, to see if it continued.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

@BuyVelomobiles

Oh, how I missed reading your arguments on this shitty story. Can't wait for those hearts to appear on her eyes in chapter 2.

Glad I decided to check back on the original, to see if it continued.

Hey, give it a chance! NTR's been averted so far, the story's implying that maybe the sister is just misunderstood, rather than her having done anything wrong, and there's an editor now to smack her if she ever does something extremely stupid.

 

[DeadToReal]

Hey, give it a chance! NTR's been averted so far, the story's implying that maybe the sister is just misunderstood, rather than her having done anything wrong, and there's an editor now to smack her if she ever does something extremely stupid.

Considering the plan to make the sister understand comes from a guy that got it from a hentai, I wouldn't rule out the sister riding that cock train just yet.

Think the editor is there to make sure the author doesn't anger people by stupidly post r18 images of the sister with hearts in her eyes and an ageho face on her pixiv account, like last time. So, not shown, but implied gangbang.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Never forget the doujin preserialization is canon.

Though a congratulation is in order for having this manga serialized

It took me looking at chapter 2 to realize what you meant. I somehow saw the pre-ser page and didn't realize the author was making them canon... And let me tell you, this story is already suffering for their inclusion, since between that bit of emotional we saw here (I'm touched AND NOW I'M ANGRY WITH NO IN BETWEEN), and the fact that the story clearly changed to make her even more sympathetic than in the pre-ser, it's very obviously an attempt to retcon what she'd already put out.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Think the editor is there to make sure the author doesn't anger people by stupidly post r18 images of the sister with hearts in her eyes and an ageho face on her pixiv account, like last time. So, not shown, but implied gangbang.

Already an improvement. And the way Chapter 2 is going, the Pixiv would make EVEN LESS sense. Like, to the point that if it's canon again, I'd just suggest everyone give this manga a 1 star rating and be done with it, because the first time is just the author trying something and failing: No harm in that; Not everything pans out. This time would be her doubling down on her retardation.

 

[b-no]

It took me looking at chapter 2 to realize what you meant. I somehow saw the pre-ser page and didn't realize the author was making them canon... And let me tell you, this story is already suffering for their inclusion, since between that bit of emotional we saw here (I'm touched AND NOW I'M ANGRY WITH NO IN BETWEEN), and the fact that the story clearly changed to make her even more sympathetic than in the pre-ser, it's very obviously an attempt to retcon what she'd already put out.

I only meant it as a joke but there're still elements from the Pixiv and Fanbox exclusive that made it to the serialization--the next chapter only expands on that scenario. And considering the ending of chapter 2, I wonder if they will retcon the story and if yes, how will they do it from chapter 3 onwards.

Seems like this will also be tagged with Sexual Violence as well.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

I only meant it as a joke but there're still elements from the Pixiv and Fanbox exclusive that made it to the serialization--the next chapter only expands on that scenario. And considering the ending of chapter 2, I wonder if they will retcon the story and if yes, how will they do it from chapter 3 onwards.

Seems like this will also be tagged with Sexual Violence as well.

Thing is, it's already being retconned. Like, if we go with the Pixiv at this point, the editor is asleep at the wheel, because the "original" story no longer makes sense. There's no way to continue with the original canon without ruining all the things she changed. There's giving "additional context", and then there's this.

 

[Takuma_Aki]

From what I understand, people were mad that she was pressured to be cum dump by a group of scumbags? I don't know. If that's the case, I don't mind that one bit if it helps convey some kind of message or plot.

But one issue I had with the original version was, I was confused AF. There were chapters where the brother touched her in her sleep, but then there were chapters about the scumbags gang bang her, and then there're chapters that she and her brother has wholesome familial relationship. It's all over the place I don't get what the actual plot were. Was she sexually harassed by everyone around her but then turn Stockholm syndrome with the brother?

I hope it is coherent this time.

 

[HAt_Sauce234]

With this being serialized, it's gonna be wholesome right...? Right?

Please 😭😭😭

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

From what I understand, people were mad that she was pressured to be cum dump by a group of scumbags? I don't know. If that's the case, I don't mind that one bit if it helps convey some kind of message or plot.

But one issue I had with the original version was, I was confused AF. There were chapters where the brother touched her in her sleep, but then there were chapters about the scumbags gang bang her, and then there're chapters that she and her brother has wholesome familial relationship. It's all over the place I don't get what the actual plot were. Was she sexually harassed by everyone around her but then turn Stockholm syndrome with the brother?

I hope it is coherent this time.

People were mad that it was untagged NTR, and that she was an ENTHUSIASTIC slut. The fact that it was untagged NTR that you had to pay to see was insulting enough on its own, but then she was also so unambiguously and hysterically into being a gangbang slut, that the fanbox undermined the entire rest of the story to by making you wonder, among other things, why she would stop in the first place. The only time she's ever uncomfortable is in the normal, publicly-viewable version.

And yes, the other one was ALL over the place, with the girl taking on whatever personality and emotional state the author wanted for that specific page.

P.S.: Bro didn't touch her. The name of the chapter is literally "In a dream". 🤨

 

[DaBoySwag77]

Y

Yes. That's exactly how that works.

I don't know that anyone but you feels that way.

bruh... I dont know if I shall be sad or laugh my ass off right now. I didnt asked for the technical deffinition of Netorare or Netorase. I described what people call bait-and-switch, or our right stuff that dont mix it well with specific genres. Im not sure if you trolling or coping, but when you look other mangas/toons/porn games you will see a similar trend people hate such stuff, no mater how you try to explain it.

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

bruh... I dont know if I shall be sad or laugh my ass off right now. I didnt asked for the technical deffinition of Netorare or Netorase. I described what people call bait-and-switch, or our right stuff that dont mix it well with specific genres. Im not sure if you trolling or coping, but when you look other mangas/toons/porn games you will see a similar trend people hate such stuff, no mater how you try to explain it.

NTR doesn't stand for "Hentai I hate". So, there's that...

 

[Takuma_Aki]

People were mad that it was untagged NTR, and that she was an ENTHUSIASTIC slut. The fact that it was untagged NTR that you had to pay to see was insulting enough on its own, but then she was also so unambiguously and hysterically into being a gangbang slut, that the fanbox undermined the entire rest of the story to by making you wonder, among other things, why she would stop in the first place. The only time she's ever uncomfortable is in the normal, publicly-viewable version.

And yes, the other one was ALL over the place, with the girl taking on whatever personality and emotional state the author wanted for that specific page.

P.S.: Bro didn't touch her. The name of the chapter is literally "In a dream". 🤨

I didn't know that. That sounds F up alright. I ca see why people would be mad then.

 

[DaBoySwag77]

NTR doesn't stand for "Hentai I hate". So, there's that...

I beg your pardon? I didnt asked for this either lol.
NTR is a fetish thing. Either you like it or not and it dosent mix well with the romance crowd nor the harem crowd, see at the comments here, the comments on the original, the comments on her twitter etc etc. Thats from my experience alone. My point is, you can try to defend the auhors and/or the actions of a fictional character like in this manga, but you cant force them to feel or think something specific, when they just saw/felt the complettly different thing.
Speaking when you say its not NTR, which you techincally are correct - people still will see it as such. Sorry to say it to you as it is.