Namaiki na Gal Ane wo Wakaraseru Hanashi - Ch. 1 - Sense of Distance

[BuyVelomobiles]

I didn't know that. That sounds F up alright. I ca see why people would be mad then.

492902

I put this together specifically to make it easier to follow the whole story.

 

[derpman568]

surprising to see this get serialized

 

[motheblackcat]

Ah yeah... too late author the bad stuff is already ingrained in this story forever

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Ah yeah... too late author the bad stuff is already ingrained in this story forever

Now that's not very nice. The editor's gone and reigned her in nice and proper. This story is doing fine. It'd be better still if she stopped trying to include the pages from her pre-ser days. Otherwise we have to worry about Chapter 4 again.

 

[BakedBanana]

I can't wait for the author to go off on a tangent and for this to end up like Gal Cleaning. or I at least hope it can be that fun before the axe.

 

[jicxkzs]

the artwork feels intense

 

[Palolo]

Make her understand..
..it's r*pe isn't it..

* looks at author *
yup

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Make her understand..
..it's r*pe isn't it..

* looks at author *
yup

Nope. Not since 482121 got her banned. We got the exact opposite of rape.

 

[CalebPlowmann]

Another author that abandons the doujin-hentai's pits and become "mainstream"

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Another author that abandons the doujin-hentai's pits and become "mainstream"

She's still putting out a Fanbox for this series.

 

[weleasewodger]

"She and i aren't related by blood"
Then who fcking cares!

Anyway interesting to see how this version of Pygmalion or My Fair Lady turns out

 

[Siranto1]

No. This is the manga where the brother "Corrected" his sister by molesting her in her sleep so she "understands" what "good sex" is like. Then it turns out Pixiv doesn't allow rape and incest, so it turned into the manga where the brother "Corrects" an enthusiastic whore with the bare minimum TLC into not being a whore.

By her gang of fuckbuddies. All at once. With extreme enthusiasm.

Because it's Japan. It's rude not to return a greeting.

Saw plenty of negative reactions from the Japanese too. It was mixed on all fronts.

P.S.:

A) Did he not see her in the hallway?
B) Isn't it weird how she went from to 😠 in just one panel so the author could re-use the scene from chapter 0?

Wdym pixiv doesn't allow that?
There's tons there (nsfw)

 

[BuyVelomobiles]

Wdym pixiv doesn't allow that?
There's tons there (nsfw)

Evidently the line is "no unconscious people". There would be no reason not to continue with the original story otherwise, since it's not only easier for her to write, but it's also objectively the best version of said story.

 

[kusekabe]

an extra cheeky shorty… RAPE CORRECTION IS REQUIRED! domain expansion: MALEVOLENT KITCHEN! i want her cooked MEDIUM RARE! 👹💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢💢

 

[raze2012]

I forgot to mention that I'm positive there won't be any Fanbox content that will worsen the overall story & piss people off.

I didn't read the fanbox route until just now, so the all-ages route was just kinda bland. Not even vanilla, just kinda like those food ads making this bread look super premium and delectable... then it's just store bought sliced bread. Not even toasted. bait.

Even if the spinoffs were canon it doesn't really change much. the all-ages routes keeps trying to convince the reader that she's already "exerienced". Which is fine. I'd hope this community isn't some weird place where people need to stay "pure" before relations.