how so?I am conflicted on this chapter.
On one hand, seeing her want two moms is adorable. On the other hand, her undermining the relationship and somehow missing hearing Luoluo's voice felt weird. Also I wanted to see more lovey dovey.how so?
Song you is such a fun character in this. This chapter may be my favorite in the series.When you wingwoman so hard you nearly ruin the relationship you're trying to create. Tough scenes but hilarious nonetheless. That child has quite the imagination. It's so rare to have a child in these stories, so I'm glad they find ways to let her shine.
idk, this chapter seemed a little... forced? then again kids are fucking stupid so what do I know
It was just being light, fun and silly, while also answering the important question of "how will the daughter react to her mother's now open new relationship that also happens to be gay?"I'm not sure if forced is the word I would use, but I see what you mean. Imo it's one of the oddest decisions to have the second-to-last chapter introduce a massive, relationship-buster of a misunderstanding only to resolve it immediately. Like, that super dramatic "I won't let you be together" followed by the chilling silence? That's like an entire angst arc worth of material alone. Then you have Song Li looking like she was about to go through her darkest days all over again, openly crying, but then...oh whoopsie jk and it's all good?
Idk if it was a clumsy way of reminding the reader that Song You's feelings are important to both of the leads, or if it was trying to show that they'll be able to overcome anything even if it means hard decisions like giving space, but I agree that the timing and pacing of it just felt super out of place