This post is just about some grammar since i'm not sure if theres somewhere else i should put this.
Within your description you put "I'm quite hate complain.(No one really want to hear them anyway)"
The grammar there is a bit off, something like "I really hate complaints. (No one really wants to hear them anyways)", "I'm a person that quite hates complaining", or "I'm someone who hates complaining. (No one really wants to hear that)" sounds better in my opinion.
"I'm" is a contraction that means "I am" ("am" is like "to be"), so the sentence becomes "I am quite hate complain.(No one really want to hear them anyway)". This sounds wrong because "hate" isn't generally used with "quite". "Really" would be a better substitute but "I am really hate complain" also sounds wrong. So the "I am" should be changed. Changing it to just "I" or leaving the "I'm" while adding "someone" or "a person that" would work better. Like "I'm a person that quite hates complaining" would work.
The end bit "(No one really want to hear them anyway)" just needs and s on "want" because the topic is plural. So "No one really wants to hear them anyway" is better ("anyways" would also work).
Your second sentence "But I'd love it if you critize, point out my mistake for me to fix, It look like a teacher / parents give out advice for me." also sounds wrong to me. I'm not sure how to fix the last part ("It look like a teacher / parents give out advice for me.") because i don't understand what you are trying to say.
But the first part "But I'd love it if you critize, point out my mistake for me to fix" could be changed to "But I'd love it if you criticize and point out my mistakes for me to fix.". Criticize was just spelled wrong and mistakes should be plural. That fix is assuming you split the first and second bit instead of making it a list with commas, and put an "and" in there.
Also I've seen you put "It's hurt" a lot when someone is in pain. In English it would be "It hurts" instead of "It is hurt". The way you translate it is like answering a question: "Is it hurt?" "Yes, it is hurt". But someone saying that something hurts out loud would just say "It hurts".
Hope that helps, i'm not great at explaining things but i tried. If i'm wrong about anything here please do correct me.