Haven't read chapter 72 & 73 yet so I didn't read this chapter. Quickly glanced over it however and the translation and typesetting looked fine and good! Nothing to complain about.
Some people have spelling errors or just straight up sentences that doesn't make sense or just the most God awful font and typesetting ever! But you had neither 😄
So I would say from my quick look that you did a good job that looked great without any obvious errors or mistakes. A really great job!
5/5
Also, F in comments for that dragon without any arms... FeelsBadMan 😞
Edit: went back to look for any other feedback I could give but you pretty much God damned nailed it 100%! A really fucking good job! The typesetting looks great in the speech bubbles and varies accordingly.
You didn't try to translate the small text next to the bubbles also which I would say is a good thing.
There are some that erase the raw and then just type in the translated part, which looks not great. Other try putting it over it which looks better but not much.
A thing you can do is probably type sfx: and then the text translation outside the frame. But looking at the size between the frame it isn't much to work with. A way to fix it is by editing the page all together and drag the panels further from each other to make enough room for you to type that stuff in. But that just over complicates things and consumes hella lot of time so in the end I wouldn't recommend it. This is the only negative feedback I could give you and it is really nitpicking.
And those text outside the bubbles doesn't really convene any necessary information. If it was necessary information it would have been inside the bubbles.
This whole edit I made just made me realize truly truly how much work redrawers do for so little appreciation.
Anyway fam, you good👍🏼 keep working in your own pace and take care of yourself
PS. I have no freaking clue about the state of who is translating this currently, so many people have thrown in their hats in the ring at this point... I think like 2 groups are translating it?? 🤔
At least you did a good job and not a bad snipe shit translation which is good and very much welcomed change of surprise releases. I can at least respect a snipe that delivers quality and to series that aren't the fastest with update
But I do believe that the proper etiquette is 3 months of no update and then it's free for grabs