Maou ni Natta node, Dungeon Tsukutte Jingai Musume to Honobono suru - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[HuevoPodrido]

Don't bully the loli!
Thanks for the chapter.

 

[Aretheus]

@SSS26032002 I'm more okay with this than most fantasy isekai. At the bare minimum, the author's at least trying to do some world building and he establishes that our protagonist is having a little bit of trouble with using magic. A step is a step, I guess.

My real issue with this story is that it isn't going anywhere. This dude has no sense of urgency, desire, aspiration, duty, or any driving motivation to do anything. Anything interesting either stumbles upon him or is done by him on a whim with no real intent. But like I said, a step is a step, and I'll take any improvement I can get from these baboon-tier writers.

 

[Drifter]

The people hunting the loli on the cover and their reason for doing so might provide him with some motivation. I'm not tired of the story just yet.

The old English just seemed wrong or clunky somehow. It isn't like I could do any better though. That kind of speech sounds cool when done right but I'm not sure where you could dig up someone to help out.

 

[starburst98]

Dragon is waifu, loli is daughteru.

 

[art17]

A wild Little Bitch appears!

 

[yarielist]

...
incoming ...
another loli for harem ... ?

 

[Vigo_to_Vigo]

Time to start my Creation Magic showing up in an Isekai chant.

Please don't make a gun, Please don't make a gun, Please don't make a gun, Please don't make a gun, Please don't make a gun.... or at the very least not a normal one.

 

[CelticMutt]

@NexVoluspa - I forget the actual name for it, but I would assume she's speaking "Samurai Japanese," which is pretty formal and flowery. It usually gets translated as pseudo Shakespearean English like here.

 

[seekermoc]

In MC's lap of course. Didn't editor-san see the cover art?

 

[Tamed]

Oi! This panel totally is copyright for Disney! He downloaded the force from her!

 

[Drezden]

хмммм

 

[CoCoShitenno]

please use normal english!!!!! what happen to this loli tongue? short tongue?

 

[ivv]

kameh*a*m*e*ha! Z*a*w*aRudo*!
ahhaHAHHAHahhahahaha xD

 

[Tomba]

"The human"? Deeeerp.. (Page 5)

 

[Levanah]

THIS DRAGON IS A WHITE SUPREMACIST

 

[Blackkid121]

“Knoweth thee” hmmmm.... that English tho

 

[Reshfan]

damn she got me good ;~;

 

[vjnbkmlf23]

Tile "Strange Uncle" get. Attribute "FBI Attention" acquired.

 

[yuu-oniichan]

Truck-kun where art thou T_T

 

[YukariTakeba]

zawwazudooo