Maou ni Natta node, Dungeon Tsukutte Jingai Musume to Honobono suru - Vol. 2 Ch. 11

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Ahhh I liked your translation better, still thanks for this chapter ^^

I really don't mind old English, just make it better. Missing letters and random intonation don't made it sounds old, but like somebody with big speech impediment. 😑
 
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as expected, seeing lefi talking like thee, thou or thy is more suitable, as if she was talking normally.
 
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so i read the LH trans version and they dont have the olde english and i like it for it was easy to understand... this one, although this olde english is better than the last chapter's LH trans version i prefer the no olde english...
 
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this gonna turn into a snipe....they fixed the last chp bt now they jus uploading new chapters
 
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Thank you.
This version is still better. (even though LH stopped screwing theirs up so badly now.)
 
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Yeah, he hates sinners so much that he was willing to nuke a city filled with innocents because a few bad people kidnapped his adopted daughter. This author is up his own ass pretty badly lol
 
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this makes more sense than the LHT version, but mistakes spotted:
-you guys typo'd "prairie" with "pririe" on pg5 and that triggers this former proofreader
-empty bubble on pg15 that should have text in it.
-page 18, "ttstrength"
 
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I noticed that although this has slightly lower resolution, this version has a lot less steam...making it even "steamier", if you know what I mean.
 
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Hmmm... a boob-loli sheep. Curious. Still a loli though. Too babyfaced not to be.

So... does the vampire loli or the dragon loli count as first waifu? Is it based on first encountered or first bonded to?
 
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Why would they remove the honorific stuff, yet use "Japanese ryoukan"?
 

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