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Been so long since last update cant remember the plot
Maou-sama no Machizukuri! ~Saikyou no Dungeon wa Kindai Toshi~
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Isekai japan guy becomes Dungeon Master/Demon Lord, receives training from waifu DL, power to create/summon from imagination, waifu gives medal/emblem for humanoid create so summons more waifu, currently tournament for greatest DL amongst 10 DL as a form of "evening party".
Incel autistic MC as always.
The writing is mediocre. Trying to make the main character look smart by making everybody else a complete effin' moron is never a good idea, it insults the readers' intelligence.
The side characters are flanderized as fuck and have no depth beyond the stereotype that they occupy.
4.5/10. The kind of thing you read with half your brain shut off. Then again, isn't most isekai like that?
The writing is mediocre. Trying to make the main character look smart by making everybody else a complete effin' moron is never a good idea, it insults the readers' intelligence.
The side characters are flanderized as fuck and have no depth beyond the stereotype that they occupy.
4.5/10. The kind of thing you read with half your brain shut off. Then again, isn't most isekai like that?
@snape
It has not been confirmed that he was isekai-ed. He only has memories from our world, but no personal memories.
It has not been confirmed that he was isekai-ed. He only has memories from our world, but no personal memories.
In the novel he asked the top guy (forgot his name) if he has lived before and why he has these memories. He was told something along the lines that he was created by soul fragments from others places and it is necessary for his ability.
The biggest difference I find from this manga ver vs novel ver:
The MC personality
This is too much difference, like watching 2 different person in the same situation. In the novel, MC is in the same situation, but handle it differently.
MC in the novel just born recently, but has so much blank memory & jumbled information from modern era (guns, plants, human nature, civilization, etc) and from that has wisdom. He doesn't swayed easily nor quick to panic, he's smart, calm, composed, and reassuring. He wouldn't flinch from just some threat, he will threat them back many folds. Show his power when it's needed, but not abuse it. A perfect leader worthy of the wisdom & information he has.
MC in the manga, boy oh boy, he's just a kid. Just some average highschool boy with some power & 1 pages google search result as a information source of his innate memory. He knows it, but can't use it skillfully. He even got played and almost used by a goddamn human merchant. Not a single piece of wisdom & charisma as a leader, I even think his monsters follow him just because he made them, not because any other feelings like sympathy nor share the same vision & ambition. He talks big about living in harmony & compassion with human, but scared of them consistently. I wont even surprised to see him 'eaten' by his power alone. His medal power is so much stronger than his mind capability to handle.
Thats why I pity you all, the 'only manga' reader, to see this awful version of MC. I beg you, please, please, please read the novel version. And you will see how badass this story (especially the MC) truly can be.
The MC personality
This is too much difference, like watching 2 different person in the same situation. In the novel, MC is in the same situation, but handle it differently.
MC in the novel just born recently, but has so much blank memory & jumbled information from modern era (guns, plants, human nature, civilization, etc) and from that has wisdom. He doesn't swayed easily nor quick to panic, he's smart, calm, composed, and reassuring. He wouldn't flinch from just some threat, he will threat them back many folds. Show his power when it's needed, but not abuse it. A perfect leader worthy of the wisdom & information he has.
MC in the manga, boy oh boy, he's just a kid. Just some average highschool boy with some power & 1 pages google search result as a information source of his innate memory. He knows it, but can't use it skillfully. He even got played and almost used by a goddamn human merchant. Not a single piece of wisdom & charisma as a leader, I even think his monsters follow him just because he made them, not because any other feelings like sympathy nor share the same vision & ambition. He talks big about living in harmony & compassion with human, but scared of them consistently. I wont even surprised to see him 'eaten' by his power alone. His medal power is so much stronger than his mind capability to handle.
Thats why I pity you all, the 'only manga' reader, to see this awful version of MC. I beg you, please, please, please read the novel version. And you will see how badass this story (especially the MC) truly can be.
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The dual personality was so forced.. I guess that's how the Mangaka can continue the story. I don't like this is turning out tho
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covers looks soft and fluffy
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Mc so naive compared to the novel this is trash
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