Megami no Sprinter

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Sprinter nee-chan can train you to run faster, but can you run faster than your raging brother with a knife in his hand ready to dismember your member?
 
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this technically coul be ntr in a near future but
in some point we see that the brother abandon his wife for other women so... you can do it takase!!
 
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This manga really doesn't address the negative effects of higher level testosterone. Side effects include: Anger issue , violent fits, stress, sleep deprivation, cognitive impairment, cardio vascular problem , high blood pressure etc. Too much of anything is bad for health. This manga only shows benefit of testosterone.
 
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It's a really good setup but the manga is all over the place.
There is a nice built in structure to serve as the skeleton, he can only ejaculate every 9 days. There is a meter for success or failure, even more than one, testosterone levels and his performance as an athlete. Every cycle can have its own theme, like fetishes. And there is escalation which should be easy to manage with orgasm on the 9th day.
Instead everything is so loose. Despite everything she puts him through, he has to ejaculate by manually rubbing one out until much later. And there is no clear escalation of tension.
 

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