Revised. Refresh page to see changes. Thanks for pointing them out.Also, appreciate the effort in bringing us this chapter. That being said a few minor issues and typos I noticed :
page 4 panel 2 : should be either "that is surrounding" (or "that's surrounding"), or "that surrounded"
page 11 panel 4 : forgotten "is" here too
page 12 panel 1 bubble 1 : some stuff got forgotten in the first sentence, second sentence isn't super clear either.
page 15 panel 1 bubble 1 : "ceased" should be "seized"
but since that ends up getting repeated in the second bubble, maybe the whole panel needs to be reworded ?
Still page 15, panel 2 : As an apology I received […] a letter of apology. Similar issue of repetition here. Maybe just drop the "As an apology" at the start ?
Same the dude even looks like he's lacking sleep (to be fair he's in a leadership position in a war).Well, i guess Author is breaking the troupe, by showcasing the Dumb Prince as good looking and with good features, while the intelligent Prince being short and chubby with average features.
500 Platinum Coins10 platinum coins huh?
How much does the cruise ship cost again?
They're supposed to be aiming for a military installation, which is more than a valid target even by today's rules of warfare.MC gonna help to pillage a city